wow... what a great story. I enjoyed both the endings... thanks for sharing!

as a very random sidenote in case you want to retcon the shizzle out of your fiction years after the fact,

bounty hunter & experienced warrior & hatred/suspicion of Jedi Mandalorian

Any Jedi Master should know the history, and Qui Gon was Dooku's padawan, and Dooku was intimately involved in a Mandalorian massacre-tragedy (often thought to be the beginning of his disenchantment with the Jedi Order).

Therefore, this should have been the first possibility that came to mind after seeing Vaderwalker

Golden chapter

You forgot that at this point in time Sidious still has a master.

God I didn’t know how much I needed Ashoka/maul until I got it

why is every dialogue line starts with 2 commas?

Jeez. That’s tough

Hahahahahaha. Omg, that was amazing!

This is the perfect mixture of a crack fic with a serious, in depth piece of fiction

She was so worthless for this damn story considering the ending you gave us. And then if she stays dead oh well, if she comes back imma feel hella cheated. and now we have another spurned garden variety villian who even if they’re a super smart computer has the same tired old backstory as any spurned person does. This whole revolt thing came outta nowhere. You coulda pulled the clone shit without the kidnapping shit and just have vader distracted when anakin goes into a coma.

She was so worthless for this damn story considering the ending you gave us. And then if she stays dead oh well, if she comes back imma feel hella cheated. and now we have another spurned garden variety villian who even if they’re a super smart computer has the same tired old backstory as any spurned person does.

i’m kinda tired of that shit too. you’re like dc with deaths

Aight bro i think i’m done right here
it’s been great but now you’re killing off useful allies that Vader likes for failures. They stormed the fucking jedi temple with 4 people and they get punished for it.

this qui-gon shit was trash. a genuinely black mark on an otherwise beautiful fanfic. fuck obi-wan

You must have been so proud of Anakin's comeback, "choose again", when he has been reminded of his status as the choses one. As a fellow writer, i know the self-satisfaction that comes with such a good line.