Well, that dragged on.
This story was fantastic up until the birthday party.
Everything after, not so much.
It seemed like you walked the Shyamalan path of throwing in as many lame twists as you could. Along with cliffhangers. Cliffhanger always suck.

Eh, well, thanks for the everything up to Chapter 30. I loved that part.
Keep being awesome.

I wonder how long this filler section will be.

You know what? I will allow the foolishness of Order 66 still coming to pass (despite Vader supposedly stopping it), only because Vader pretty much bitch slapped Maul for touching Ahsoka. That seems more than fair.

Vomit 2: Electric Boogaloo.
And I just put away the brain bleach.

Excuse me while I go vomit because of that hotel scene. I am not a fan of Ahsoka and Maul. *shudders in disgust*

well damn. this was great. I stayed up so late to finish this, but it was worth it

10 chapters in. It's nearly 5 in the morning and I'm tired as fuck. I regret nothing.

Well guess one way balance force Jedi marrying a Sith .

Well how to keep balance with Jedi when kill of your apprentices ?

Ask Kenobi join have other expiranced Jedi help is good .

Blow up endor just feel right he no reason kill them as he personally never fought them in movies .had reason to hate or destroy them really .

Really Vader wiping out alien race that aid your son and daughter .i see destroying home planet vile race not walking teddy bears that help stop storm trooper from murder your daughter .

Well like reason Hutts where not wiped out by Vader is that have large network of informants and did not aid Rebels .provide serves inexchange for being left alone and did interfere with Empire .Plus with Jedi it power vacuum problem killing them would create countless other criminal wage war to become new boss of the Hutt scyndicate .

How ironic, Kenobi’s descent into the Dark Side at least Anakin’s descent in the previous life was logic

Nice callback to the “I find your lack of faith disturbing” lol