It wouldn’t be a true fight with Sidious without the latter’s mindgames XD

Oh snap, that was a good one. That should teach Vader not to underestimate even someone whom he has long surpassed in prowess

And so the Epic fight of the century begins

At least Maul didn’t die but if Vader finds out who she is, would he even take her since her decisions got his disciple killed?

Wow... I feel like shedding tears, right now. This, this has been a world-shattering epic adventure. I'm speechless. This is an astounding, complex, emotional rollercoaster, well written piece of fanfic. This is just pure brilliance. Thank you, really. For this magnificent work of a fanfic. Kudos!
-Sincerely, a Reader.
(If you ever see this, I hope it brightens your day. Stay safe)

Wow...I feel like shedding tears, right now. This, this has been a world-shattering epic adventure. I'm speechless. This is an astounding, complex, emotional rollercoaster, well written piece of fanfic. This is just pure brilliance. This got me hooked reading it hours on end. I... Thank you, really. For this magnificent work of a fanfic. Thank you.
- Sincerely, a Reader.
(If you ever see this, I hope it brightens your day. Stay safe.)

Both Ends are utter Trash. Shame on you.

This reminds me in one of the newer movies. Leia had been in space with no equipment and she used the Force to get back to an airlock. I'm seeing what happened with Maul.

Wow what a terrible chapter lol I’ll give this story only a few more chapters and if he acts like he did this chapter then this will be a drop. Could’ve been good but this chapter ruined so much

Oh my god this is looking beautiful with Maul as his true apprentice and savage/feral as “acolytes” but will be much stronger. Now dooku could slide in and manage the actual people of an empire while Vader leads it.

So why’d they get rid of the moon?

YESSSSS this is exactly what I was waiting for! Lol

In every time travel anakin/Vader fanfics I always wanted him to take Maul as an apprentice and actually teach him because the night sisters would be a great Allie and Maul with his actual potential and sidious ruined

And somehow, it did sink in until just now, how petty it is that you have made Vader

Eh. The story falls off after this point. You should’ve just killed the AI and left maul alive. It’s so boring now. You should have left some mystery left, but you killed off all your unique characters. I admit you jebaited me before, but you cannot bring back maul or Bellatrix from the dead, or maul’s brother who’s name I’ve already forgotten due to lack of character development. Decent story, lack of world building and character development. Hope it’s developed.