Reviews for Free from Force
Guest chapter 42 . 9/16/2019
So apparently, before, when it wasn't needed, he had all the ships bugged, and he caught Sidious trying to activate Order 66 in an instant. However, now he doesn't.

Also, this is hilarious. Let's ignore how utterly stupid it is that there is no authentication, and you only need a video of Anakin saying "Execute Order 66". Now, the whole world believes that it was Anakin sending the order. They somehow didn't notice the setting of his being in the Jedi Council. Somehow, they didn't notice the inflection of the words, "Execute Order 66", since it was originally said in a sentence, rather than an order by itself.

They are also sure that it isn't Vader who sent the order. What does this mean? It means that there is a large enough difference between Vader and Anakin visually. This, in turn, implies that the command is not keyed to Vader, but what Vader looked like when he was young. Which means Vader didn't take into account that he'd look older as time goes on.

Do you have any idea how utterly stupid this turn of event is? Stop trying to be clever. You aren't good enough.
Guest chapter 41 . 9/16/2019
Also, why the fuck would Vader keep talking about order 66 if he has altered it? It seems like a retarded thing to do, and only serves to get himself blamed.
Guest chapter 41 . 9/16/2019
Stop pretending this is some brilliant plan. This is absolutely retarded. Because apparently, you can just splice a version of someone saying an order, and the order will be passed? Because apparently, there aren't authentication codes? Because Vader never thought about how Anakin and him are the same?

Also, because Vader wouldn't immediately catch on to this, considering he has everything hacked? Because Vader never considered this possibility before?

How stupid is this? How stupid are you to act like this is some super smart thing you are doing, eh? EHHHHH?
Guest chapter 39 . 9/16/2019
Ok, know the difference between "lose" and "loose".
Guest chapter 32 . 9/15/2019
It's not a trick if it is retarded. It's also not a trick if what happened is so confusing that we can barely follow what is supposedly going on.
Guest chapter 31 . 9/15/2019
What? Vader just killed one of his generals for basically no reason? You are trying to hard to make this story "dark". It's just actually stupid.

Also, it was really confusing. I have no idea what happened.
Guest chapter 29 . 9/15/2019
I have to admit. This is the most hilarious scenario so far.
Guest chapter 25 . 9/15/2019
You know, the problem with a 16 year old writing a story is that every fucking fucking character acts like a 16 year old.

Did Obi-wan actually throw a tantrums and throw books around? I'm impressed at how much you've mangled his character.
Guest chapter 23 . 9/15/2019
Sleep deprivation is torture.
Guest chapter 22 . 9/15/2019
Darth Vader is being retarded again. Apparently, the great Sith Lord can't avoid acting like a 16 year old emo kid, huh?
Guest chapter 21 . 9/15/2019
You don't just kill people for character development.
Guest chapter 12 . 9/15/2019
Again, you are being a canon-bitch. You just have to follow canon and get Qui-Gon killed, despite how utterly retarded it would be. He is the ONLY JEDI that Anakin likes, as you've stated before.

This is absolutely retarded.
Guest chapter 9 . 9/15/2019
This chapter is absolutely retarded, and shows what happens when a author can't do jackshit except follow canon.

Vader's letting Anakin join the Jedi is about as stupid as it gets. There is absolutely no reason he'd encourage him to do so, and every reason not to. Furthermore, he showed himself as a Sith at the end. Why the fuck would he do that?

I know what happened. You went through star wars, and looked at all the fight scenes, and thought, huh, we should follow this but put Anakin in it. And you did, and you think you made some good scenes. But you didn't. All you did was make a shitty story.
Guest chapter 3 . 9/15/2019
Stop trying to write cliffhangers, and instead learn to spell.
Aconitum613 chapter 31 . 9/5/2019
THats shit... Realy dislike it and stop reading now
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