Jesus what a fucking waste. This was 64 chapters of complete shite.

If Obi-Wan is killed, hes probably gonna become a Force Ghost. Then he will tell Anakin and shit will go down.

And you said you hates Palpatine, but you let him frame both Anakins?

Well this isn't fucked up at all. Ahsoka is what, seventeen years old? Maul is around thirty-five. He is literally twice her age.

Maul is like twice the age of Ahsoka

Jedi cruisers have 200 less guns than star destroyers! Keep up the good work!

Lmao the "too many capital letters" part was gold.

You refer to the ‘world’ a lot throughout, when ‘ we shall bring peace to this galaxy’ makes more sense.

Not the Ewoks!

I don’t think you understand how oxygen works in space... it’s literally a vacuum which means the air would get pulled out of your nose or even your ears possible even your eyes and would leave you freezing to death, here you just have the clone chick taking off a mask and being fine... I’m not really complaining, but I’m just saying this portion of the story where the AI rebels is kind of shit and unneeded other than that, great story

Who names a pet *Domination or Termination* ?

I don't know why, but this chapter really made me imagine Older Anakin as Haydenson with J.E Jones's voice

The most significant thing I could suggest is that show don't tell. you tell us that Vader is broken. you tell us that the characters have certain beliefs etc etc. show don't tell. I think your characters would be more believable that way.

That is such a warm and happy ending. I loved this story and sometimes i felt like crying. So well written and beautiful, and i really felt for all the characters. What a remark world of grey you built. Thank you for writing this brilliant tale

But Bellatrix was one of my favorite characters ;-; that's sad