I assume Vader’s plans for Kamino are to reprogram the 66th order?

Wooooooow that was AMAZING. not gonna read the dark chapter cause I can’t handle whatever it’s gonna do to my bae...buuut wow I haven’t read one book to the end in a while this was perfection. Now I’m feeling the emptiness after reading a one of a kind.

PERIOD! He snapped!

I’ve been stuck on this book... and bc of that I have not done any of my work...I’m a university student...THIS IS NOT OKAY! Lmbo! Essay due in a few hrs but here I am reading this I still have 4 pages to write! But I’m so happy Vader didn’t kill bro I was about to be UPSET!

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No, id doesn't mean you've done your job well. It means your shoddy characterization is broken and all over the place.

I wanted to reply to your AN at the end of the chapter (even if I won't get an answer x) )

I think nobody CAN make an army of force-sensitive clones. A) The force itself would most likely object. B) Also, how would you train them? There is a reason the Jedi Order, while numbering in the 10.000 before the Clone Wars, only has so few trained force-sensitives compared to the entire galaxy. Even if it isn't training as a Jedi, the results would be subpar at best. C) It's better to train in conventional army methods to train soldiers rather than attempt the complex, decade-long training as a force-sensitive.

That said, this is fanfiction, and if you can justify your logic well enough and write in an entertaining way, perhaps as Omake, nobody will rip you a new one xD There are far worse theories out there ;)

Thank you for writing this story. I've been enjoying it so far.

Man, the Guest posting all the flaming reviews needs to calm down... It's a fanfiction, it's not like you bloody paid for it or anything.

You should not be writing characters you do not know. At all. If your source is the movies, you are severely lacking. If you had the Clone Wars under your belt, you'd get far more character out of the, well, characters you have available. More history, more personality, you'd have more to work with. Take Clone Wars Darth Maul for example. He was strong. Very strong. He was able to go against Obi Wan, in his pride, as an even opponent and, using two sabers, was capable of fighting off Sidious for a short amount of time, and he took over the most war oriented planet known, Mandalore. So he, as well as Savage, feel incredibly underwhelming. All the characters feel weaker than their clone wars variants. There's so much that happened in the clone wars you could've used, but instead you decided to be foolish and include its characters. Extremely poor choices.

... which kind of ssd? Dude... Super Star Destroyers, SSD's, were all around a certain length of 12 kilometers if I remember right. The Executor, is of the executor class. It was the first of its kind. There were mandators, the Eclipse, and a few other types to name a few.

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Will young Anakin ever top being such a retarded fucking bitch, literally this entire series since he became a Jedi his IQ dropped to 2.4. He makes the dumbest fucking decisions and seems insistent on fucking everyone else over by accident

Skipped the previous chapters because the story was so stupid.

However, I just have to comment on the fact that you still can't distinguish between "then" and "than".

Ah yes, destroy your whole fleet and wipe out the best ally you have because she made a smart decision while you were being dumb.

I can't stand this stupidity anymore.

So what your author notes tell me is that you don't actually have a plan, and you'll just write whatever suits your taste in the moment.

It's good that you admit that. However, this is a problem because you can't get your plot to follow your characters. You've always forced your characters to follow the plot. So what we have is a story where the characters are plot devices whose only purpose is to follow the plot, and the plot doesn't matter because you just come up with it on the spot.