Again, you are being a canon-bitch. You just have to follow canon and get Qui-Gon killed, despite how utterly retarded it would be. He is the ONLY JEDI that Anakin likes, as you've stated before.

This is absolutely retarded.

This chapter is absolutely retarded, and shows what happens when a author can't do jackshit except follow canon.

Vader's letting Anakin join the Jedi is about as stupid as it gets. There is absolutely no reason he'd encourage him to do so, and every reason not to. Furthermore, he showed himself as a Sith at the end. Why the fuck would he do that?

I know what happened. You went through star wars, and looked at all the fight scenes, and thought, huh, we should follow this but put Anakin in it. And you did, and you think you made some good scenes. But you didn't. All you did was make a shitty story.

Stop trying to write cliffhangers, and instead learn to spell.

THats shit... Realy dislike it and stop reading now

I definitely choose Light. this story is phenomenal. not gonna lie reading/watching Vader redeem himself only to slowly plunge back into the depths was both awesome and nerve-wracking. thank you for writing this. It has been a pleasure to read. Not many Vader time travel fanfics, of the few I've read; this one is the best.

interesting, I would totally watch that as a movie.

not really a fan of the double ending but it was aight

What the fuck mate, you actually killed qui gon

Obi-wan is gonna become sidious's new apprentice, isn't he..

I had fun reading your story! Thanks!

He killed the teddies?! So sad right now.

Used to being dramatic simply by existing, indeed. That's a wonderful way to put Vader's personality haha.

I'd have liked you to take Vader away from claiming he's a Sith - 'cause I don't really see it. It feels like either you / the character are trapped in the mindset of Dark Side User Sith, even when you have Vader all but tell Qui Gon that Light Side User / Jedi, that you don't HAVE to join the order to use the force.
I see Vader as more of a Do-What-I-Want Dark Side User than any true Sith, similarities are there sure.
I feel like he has no real reason to follow the Rule of Two mindset - he could create an Anti-Jedi order of hundreds of Dark Side users, potentially, he has confidence in his own ridiculous strength and has no real reason to fear his Apprentices rising up to take him down, per se, so he doesn't have to limit the threats against him the same as Sith Lords do.
Ah well, another story may do that I suppose. You've done good work here anyway :)

I don't like your explanation of the force 'cause it sort of contradicts canon - the Old Code had light side users fostering their emotions and using them to make their powers stronger - the positive ones not the negative. It's only the New Code that makes Jedi seek to be emotionless, and the description of the force you gave made it seem like the light side can only lead towards emotionless.
Completely fine since this is your story and any changes you want to make are allowed, it's just a personal complaint :o

I love picturing Obi looking at Qui like he lost his fucking mind saying they wouldn't find trouble. That's such a great interaction because it's so fucking true with the shenanigans they're forced into time and time again haha