Beautiful story. I had expected to find a story that had a good idea and paced quite well but unfinished halfway through. This was a pleasant surprise and to be honest you should try looking into writing fiction professionally.

I think I've read too much literotica because when Schmi told him to act like her husband, well, giggity. Incest is wincest. I know I have issues.

I see that this time "I am your father" went down much better :)
Borys

This is the closest I’ve seen a fanfiction toe the line of being a crack fic but still manage to be serious. TEACH US OH WISE ONE!

The Obi-Wan Situation is... wicked!

... best would be to be the husbands brother! makes more sense and is less icky

what a master piece well done

This is like my dope my ass is sad I come here to read this,and it always makes me a lot for this beautiful thing

thanks for the story

YOO THIS WAS AMAZING

The whole story just came tigether beautifully and I actually cared about bellsonly criticism would be too many fake outs with deaths, but even then i loved what the character became

is that how you see the movies? do you hate all of the main characters that much? would you rather cut people in half and revel in the blood? psychopath? throw yourself off of something please. it already has too many people who BATHE in all the hatred this world has to offer.

darth vader goes back to being petulant little bitch anakin and the force agrees! im not even gonna try this story!

heyyy so I have no idea if you got my other "guest" review for the first chapter that said I'd be rereading (for some reason it didn't show up at all?) but I apparently just spent about 11 hours straight, reading this fanfic. 11 hours broken only by, what, bathroom breaks probably? Damn.
There's a few plot inconsistencies and some things you missed, but I hadn't pointed them out on account of (1) I was so engrossed in the story all over again, and (2) I wasn't sure if I should've, and also (3) I wasn't sure if you'd get them on account of I wasn't sure if you got the review I left a few days ago. Anyway, I just realized Shmi didn't have a conclusion in this ending? She sorta got one in the Dark ending so I'm wondering why she isn't mentioned at all in this one. Ah well. I'll just assume everything turned out happily ever after with her too, haha

Hi there! It's been a long time but I just wanted to say that I still think of this fic every so often, and quite frequently. There's so much of this that I still love a lot. I was wondering if there are any plans of revisiting the series for, perhaps, proofreading and editing?

(I have no idea if you still remember my name so I'll just mention that I was one of those that followed and read this story from the very beginning!)

I know that this is a pretty old story, but to my knowledge, you are correct about secondary hyperdrives on ships. From what I remember (this info is now considered Legends), many ships during the New Republic era would have backup hyperdrives that would be used in the event of the primary hyperdrive failure. However, these backup hyperdrives would be of much lower rating due to their much smaller size.