Another interesting idea. I do wish that you had a plan for Harry to, well, actually LIVE. How sad for him and the world.
And, you ended it without actually ENDING it. No, somewhat, promised, visit to Hagrid. No finally. You had ch. 4 pt. 1, and no part 2. Something is definitely missing. This chapter is just a filler. Nothing really happened here. You definitely need to flesh this out, so to speak.

I enjoyed your story

Thanks for sharing this excellent story.

An unusual story, but very readable.

This was enjoyable. I can never decide how I feel about putting heaven and hell into a magical world. It just doesn't seem to fit. Was Mariah Black Tonks kid too?

Please update. You have only one chapter left right?

Hello,
Good story but I was hoping for a longer story it was so good. I guess I'll have to let my imagination run amuck! What little I have that's why I'm a reader not a writer!

Is it bad that I enjoyed the writer's block thing even more than the actual chapter? I mean, sure, I loved the chapter more but... that bit had me in stitches.

Well. This is going to be fun

I tried looking though the comments and maybe I'm just missing it/dumb. but whose kid is Mariah black? did tonks have Sirius kid as well as Remus?

Great story. Loved the idea.

Sad but thought-provoking. Thank you

I CAN UNDERSTAND THAT IT ENDS THERE, truly, BUT I WANT TO SEE VOLDIE GET HIS ARSE KICKED

SAY WHAT!

You CAN'T end it here!

Even though we all know it's inevitable, we STILL want to see Voldie getting his ass handed to him.

Great plot. I agree with Epeefencer, it is bittersweet.