Reviews for Destiny Rebirth |
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![]() ![]() This is such a good story! It’s honestly sweet with Naruko and Naruto hopefully you’ll continue this soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Rest In Peace to Emi Shinohara the VA of Uzumaki Kushina. |
![]() ![]() You call yourself a ninja go ah ad tell every goddam thing useless fic |
![]() ![]() ![]() Naruto is treating black zetsu like he's some all seeing dimension crossing entity for some reason which is pretty strange. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wouldn't mind him pulling Sakura too |
![]() ![]() ![]() If some day you decided to update this story and finish it, i would like to give an opinion that hopefully help you to build naruto and naruko characters. i think it would be the best not have naruko learning the same jutsu of naruto because if two characters literally have the same arsenal of jutsu's then there is no uniqueness and originality of tht characters. i would say maybe have naruto give her some advice and pointers for her training and with the time skip have her train under tsunade instead of jiraiya, that way they will have diferrent fighting style and jutsu arsenal and so that will make the reader realise that these two are two different characters with different personalities, fighting style, and skill set that make them different in how to resolve their problem. i think thats all, thank you for giving us this great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() yo you good |
![]() ![]() ![]() you dead? |
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![]() ![]() this is daymn ggood |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a great story. I binged it, sadly it doesnt look like u will continue this but many many thanks for making it. it was awesome and fun to read. |
![]() ![]() that fanfic was fuckin great the only bad thing about for me is that it wass not continued |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update, it's a brilliant story |
![]() ![]() ![]() man justice for karin after all you have made the setup to save tayuya why not save karin from her hell |