Reviews for Destiny Rebirth |
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![]() ![]() ![]() " Toji MizukiFINALLY! The side character got his surname! |
![]() ![]() ![]() love this and personally love how this is a naruto and naruko thing since i never seen much of that done like this appreciate it and i wait for the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sad kinda loved the story sadly it ended |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope you get back to this story it is very very good. I’m looking forward to more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() no no no no no no the romance are to rushed,really peoplw just going to except naruti being naruko brother i call bullshit and he literally look likes the 4th and saying that naruko is her brother will make people have the connection that naruko is the 4th daughter and lastly konoha have just seen someone that are claimed to be naruko brother with the same f-ing hair and the first thing they said is related to romance and not some basic information really ahhhhhhhhh |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy shit this is some real illegal stuff man from "Onii-chan" to "Naruto-Kun" |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is illegal my man... Step Bro/Step Sis lmaooooooooo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update please |
![]() ![]() This gives another meaning to "Go fuck yourself" lol |
![]() ![]() sad it's abandoned. nice fic! |
![]() ![]() ayt i cant tell if this is incest or what but... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is it selfcest, incest, or something else. Who knows! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Getting good. No plot holes I can find. Most people hate op characters, but I happen to love them that way because Naruto especially at the end of the day got op through hard times and next to nil help even when he was the reincarnation of the little brother Ashura (smart kid, that one) who did everything with his team. Curious how you will have naruko get powered up to keep up with him. And yeah, this is being added to my personal bookmark list AKA speed dial and home screen shortcut. Just back your work up thoroughly just in case you make the site mods mad when you do the inevitable fun part lol. How they expect people to flex their own creativity with the ridiculous deletions and bans, I'll need know. Glad I'm just a reader not a writer here! Thanks for a gem of a read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This fanfic is probably made by Fegelein FEGELEIN FEGELEIN FEGELEIN |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not super impressed. The fact that you've already basically assured the audience that there plot will largely play out the same was a buzzkill. |