Reviews for Harry Breaks Free |
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![]() ![]() Thanks for sharing your story. I really enjoyed it and it’s great. You actually did kind of an epilogue for it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic! Both the original and this edited reread. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So anticlimatic... here's another suggestion, if you feel. Let Nagini and Voldemort die, when Harry ambushes him. And then Harry comes to know Voldemort is dead .. let him keep this secret from everyone...let Dumbledore not have the peace in death |
![]() ![]() ![]() An incredible story. Bravo. |
![]() ![]() thank you - what a great story , I am glad I came across this |
![]() ![]() what a fantastic start to a story first story or not it's great- I can't wait to read the rest - thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() ummm i like it not over top and 200 titles well thought out chapter |
![]() ![]() Really enjoyed this different take on Harry taking control. However, he was far too patient with the Order and the way they treated him, I found myself almost yelling at him to tell them off. And as for Hermione's constant criticism, it was so annoying, especially as he never really told her to stop, it became tedious in the end. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful job. Love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i enjoyed this once again. thanks |
![]() ![]() 1-Dude, buy a GOOD dictionary. 2-Look up the meanings of Confirm and Conform. They are not the same. 3-Then edit your prior postings to replace the incorrect CONFORMATION with the correct wording of CONFIRMATION. 4-Apoogise to your readers for being a cretin. 5-Tell me off for being a grammar nazi. (Optionally give me the 2 finer salute.) 6-Carry on posting after changing your editor. Ciao. Buck eedjit signing off! |
![]() ![]() thank you :) |
![]() ![]() Malfoy we’re not wealthy . Potters had Trillions no one was richer than Harry. The rich were Potter Black And Greengrass |
![]() ![]() Room of Requirement . No s . |
![]() ![]() Sirius Family would never sell off their land. And The Potters wereTrillionaires |