Such a wild ride. A bit annoying the first time round but really comes into its own on second readthrough.

... A fanfic continuation of a fanfic. And it even has a fanfic prologue written by someone else. The levels of meta round these parts are quite incredible. And I looooove it!

Not to be pedantic, but Merlin would have been speaking a Brittonic (Celtic) ancestor of Welsh, not Old English

How many years have passed? Harry is incredibly dumb if he is still having problems with the vow. He would of solved it in moments. This character is too OOC.

Thanks for writing this.

"Having irrational or evil instincts or subconscious beliefs doesn't make you irrational or evil, if you don't act on them. In fact, he considered, her beliefs might make Amelia a particularly good person."

Though of course people would still trust a babysitter that wouldn't have sexual thoughts about their kids more than a babysitter that will try their absolute best not to act on their sexual thoughts about their kids.

Hermione needs to redefine her word for "death" if she thinks people ceasing to be and a star ceasing to be are both "death" or that death is in any way "natural".

This is probably one of the best fanfiction I've ever read. The very well writen prose, fascinating world-building, and deep emotionally investing characters made this story supper dupper interesting. Good job :)

Wow so interesting once again!

SPOILS. DON'T READ IF YOU HAVEN'T READ until chapter 49

With the expected death of some character that I will not name so that I do not spoil review readers, I wonder if he has decided to create a type of horcrux for himself to relive and destroyed completely his memory of it, or even if the last paragraph Meldh said ("the world will shake because of it. A great and fearsome god calls for blood") will invoke Harry's vow to make him stop compulsion for a while? Or maybe a future phrasing will do it more completely. It's more of a hope than a guess right now to be honest. In any case, the downfall of Meldh will probably be his overconfidence and his avoidance to listen to Harry's advice, as is foreshadowed, I feel like.

I really hope Hermione's troll powers will transfigure the changed brain connections back to normal as they are changed by the spell. That might save her from a sad fate, but I also have a suspicion that Voldemort hasn't said his last "Bah"! :) Maybe also that Harry will be able eventually to solve his own control with strength of will, but I really hope that's not the solution.

Argghhh! This is so infuriating yet so fascinating! I don't know what'll come next, but I really hope Harry gets out of this hellhole.

This is evil. I told myself I was going to sleep, and then you end a chapter like that? I can't do anything anymore but keep reading, now!
Seriously though, it's an awesome chapter as always and I'm not waiting a second to start reading the next. Sorry future me.

Wow! I loved the beautiful foreshawdowing of these last paragraphs. I'm on the edge of my seat :)

You are very good at what you do. I especially appreciate your taking the time to add in other languages. The end was rushed a little, but i suppose that was inescapable.
Thank you, and great job.

Loved the story thank u

I don't know what the ritual was that involves... sacrificing a star to bring a person back to life, I guess? I must have forgotten something.

The ending wasn't, somehow, as amazing as I'd expected, but it was a strong ending to a very strong story.