Reviews for Damascene
Gree chapter 2 . 5/16/2015
This is an interesting take on the whole ''fictional characters replace the Servants'' concept. Most people seem to just copy The Infamous Man's Fate Zero Sense and set their stories in the Fourth War. That and I also liked that you also switched up the Servant classes as well. It's a breath of originality.

Your writing and attention to detail are also better than the average example of these Servant replacement fics. I can guess that Caster is the Dragonborn from Skyrim, based off his comments. I have no idea who Saber is though.
coronadomontes chapter 2 . 5/8/2015
buen fanfic-good fanfic
zerodragon chapter 2 . 5/8/2015
i am surprise to see bazett is still around.
FranKey AdeL chapter 2 . 5/8/2015
Me likey~ Followed~
Gashadokuro Amanojaku chapter 2 . 5/7/2015
Nice chapter! Even though it’s taking some time for all the heroes to be summoned I don’t mind since we get so many interesting conversations between the characters. I also like that you showed how Kirei is still taking his duties as a priest seriously even after the fourth war. And Caster is really just as great as I predicted him to be.
xbox432 chapter 1 . 4/13/2015
Hmm, interesting start. And I'm enjoying the characters so far, Saber was especially interesting to read. And most importantly, to me anyways, is that the editing was top notch. It always distracts me from the story when I keep running in to typos, but it was a smooth read here. Thanks for the entertainment.
MadFrog chapter 1 . 4/10/2015
Good work! Very interesting, and most importantly, not stereotyped.
zerodragon chapter 1 . 4/10/2015
interesting start, i can't tell who any of your servants are.
Gashadokuro Amanojaku chapter 1 . 4/10/2015
Nice start for a story. The character are portrayed rather well and detailed. I especially liked the interactions at the Einzbern meeting.
Of the Servants I don’t recognize Saber, but I still like her personality. And I am really interested what kind of personality and spells you are going to give Caster, though just his first sentence is promising already.
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