Zeke already kiled eric when the group traid too stop the simulation

I dont understand why Christina needed to apologize. Tris needs to move on and needs to think on the brighter side. Bad things are always going to happen but if u sulk about the pass u will never move on. So it's basically saying that if Tris has a baby she will be crying because they remind her of the baby that she never had? Love the writing tho.

I love this story! It's well written and creative.

Very well written other than a few run on sentences. But I would like to see Tris’ character appear more: her selflessness, bravery, smarts, honesty, kindness. It seems like you put a magnifying glass on her moments of weakness, even though in the books, there are plenty of moments where she is strong.

THANK THE LORD THAT TRIS DIDN'T DIE IN THIS VERSION YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY YAY!

I loveeeeee this sooooo muchh

Hello you have covered one of the hardest things. I have had multiple miscarriages I have 2 wonderful kids and I didn't always now. The pain and the fact that no matter what is said it doesn't got away has been portrayed very honestly I want to thank you for that.

Nice epilogue.

Yikes. Didn't expect that either.

Love that Will & Christina are together.

That was a surprise. Didn't expect her when you titled the chapter "she's back."

Sounds like a beautiful wedding.

Dress sounds beautiful. ️

BFF's to the end.

Yep - those 3 are trouble.