Wow, I'm impressed, I literally can not read this. I find your version of Yang so incredibly frustrating as to be constantly distracted by sheer irritation that the story becomes impossible to read. Didn't think that was possible so codo's for that.

It's a bit of a bummer cause this seems interesting and Bloodborne novels of a reasonable length are hard to find so I'd love to read this, if it didn't take only three chapters to leave me so irritated as to be unfit for polite company.

I wish you would of chosen the silent and quiet bloodborn hunter

Tonight Ruby join the hunt.

eugh what a boring way to go about is.

Please don't excessively spread bloodborne monsters into RWBY

I love what you're doing with Cardin. he's more human

My guy. Please use commas, full stops and other punctuation when needed.
What does it mean to be a huntsman? Is it...? Is correct.
What does it mean to be a huntsman is it... is wrong. This is the only example I could think of at the moment. You have no idea how much of a turn off this is.

yea dont like the way its going

Mr encanta este fic

Me encanta este fic! Amo como representas todo de forma madura y ruby? Uff! Genial! Bien hecho!

It seems odd that he never clarified that they were not dead, and that no one pointed out that he really could have phrased it better, and was leading them to believe that they were dead, Especially when they accused him of murder and he didn't deny it outright then.

Not to be that guy but the typos and lack of punctuation is killing me here.

You certainly could use more punctuation.

Whenever I see an old author note on a fanfiction saying they're big RWBY fans, I feel sad for them.

eh, I might come back to this later, when my taste in fiction includes forced plot, bad dialogues, skipped words in sentences, bad formatting, weak-willed/beta MC's, and shit ton of other minuses.
Like really, MC doesn't murder anyone, but just beats up RWBY, after they invade his privacy, and they still force him to come with them.