Reviews for RWBY:Creature Shifter chapter 1 . 9/7/2021
dude get a beta reader there are a bunch of spelling mistakes and missing words
Born2BeGodLike chapter 7 . 5/11/2021
Now I lost interest in continuing. They pair up way to early, Blake out character and you doing it again in not separating who talking. I had to once again re-read it just to figure out who said what. The story so far look good but you wrote slightly bad.
Born2BeGodLike chapter 3 . 5/11/2021
Much better. Now I know who saying what now. Glad to see this change done.
Born2BeGodLike chapter 1 . 5/11/2021
Mistake #1 appears already. Instead separating when each character talks. It instead mix together. Why do they do it? Now I'm going to have to re read to make sure I know who saying what.
joeyginise chapter 38 . 3/6/2021
Hate to tell ya this buddy, but uh, your story just might be garbage. But worry not, for there is a cure!

It's called practice, and it isn't a one time thing.
joeyginise chapter 36 . 3/6/2021
The Deaths were taken to lightly. If anything, all of Team RWBY should be disgusted by all the murder happening before them. You clearly don't know anything about these characters at all.
Nitro zeus chapter 21 . 10/7/2019
I know what that’s like
My great grandpa Norman died in November too
XenoLucifer chapter 7 . 9/26/2018
Grammar is alot better than in the first chapter.
XenoLucifer chapter 5 . 9/26/2018
What good is having 100% of his aura displayed if he can only use 40%
XenoLucifer chapter 1 . 9/26/2018
Oof the grammar.
JessesanMan chapter 2 . 1/31/2017
Can't read it. Everything is junked up together.
Guest chapter 11 . 9/27/2016
Jaune's weapon is named Crocea Mars
Guest chapter 5 . 9/27/2016
Um...doesn't it take longer than one day for someone to confess their love to someone else since they barely know each other?
ChimaTigon chapter 18 . 7/1/2016
I look at that website too.
delta2177 chapter 1 . 6/18/2016
after reading this all the way through I feel I should say this you are out of your mind in the best way possible keep up the good work :)
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