Reviews for The Foundation Must be True |
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![]() ![]() Will there be a sequel? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pencils do not, and never have, contained lead. Just thought you ought to know. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Karin would be proud of her daughter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm mostly wondering what happened to the two militants that were with them, going from six to four seems like a pretty concerning development. Might've just not registered it after reading it if it was mentioned, though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel like there is a sense of ironyor whatever the proper terminology is, for a being named Legion saying 'Sic Semper Tyrannis'. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahaha, that's wonderful! Off to a great start so far, I don't have any particular complaints to point out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I want a personal AI that can make cool shit now… |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome to see you update again! although i am a bit late I hope you keep up the good work. also sorry to hear that someone has been doing that like seriously the world is already messed up as it is we really don't need someone else being that sort of bitter towards someone else just for something they dislike. anyways cheers to ya keep up your good work and the like wooot woot! |
![]() ![]() After reading this gem of a fanfiction, I’m proud to say that this fanfic is arguably one of the best I’ve seen in a while. And while it is no longer being updated, I hope to the writer that reads this is writing perhaps stories or something of the sort. In any case, this was a wonder to read, may it be picked up in the future by your own or another’s hand. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Buddy! You're writing is truly lovely my friend, and I'm very thankful you've decided to craft this artwork of a fanfiction! I'm pretty bad with long reviews, but I just wanted you to know you're work is truly, truly amazing work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So a HEAT rocket, something that’s meant to pierce solid metal, have trouble piercing solid stone That doesn’t make sense since rocket launchers have been used against pillboxes and buildings and has been proven to pierce more reinforced concrete better than piercing solid steel such as the M72 LAW being able to pierce 6 feet of earth, 2 feet of reinforced concrete, and can penetrate 1 foot of steel |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great work Although my only nitpick was the lore dump at the beginning, that cordite was used in the guns despite cordite being obsolete compared to smokeless powder and it was last used in WW2, also the time it takes to make stuff in-game is actually how fast they’re built Otherwise, good story and keep up the good writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is AWESOME! Please come back to this beautiful story someday! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It seems like we might never know why Siesta is fighting |
![]() ![]() ![]() eeyyyy cliffhanger! the story is nice. plz finish it. wanna see siesta and legion decimate wardes and the enemy troops |