I wonder if the familiar runes still have any effect and if so would the knowledge of how use any weapon translate to not only LEGION but theoretically Louise herself. I mean, it has already been shown that the runes extend to the Militants, so since Louise's armor was created by LEGION, wouldn't it be possible for the abilities the runes provide to extend to her somewhat like it did to Saito in canon (the strength and agility buffs as well as the knowledge); but reduced to when she is actually wearing the armor. It would certainly help her if she get into any conflicts (like the trip to Albion, etc.) where she may be cut off from help from Legion or otherwise. Also on a more personal note; I would just really love to see Louise running around wielding a lazer pistol and Derf once in a while and not just directing combat through Legion the entire time. Anyway, I thought this was a cool idea/concept for you to consider using. Thanks!

Hi I'm unknown I'm currently building a reputation that I intend to keep on this place and I have one real quick suggestion for future chapters prevent using words from our world a succubess is a evil creature not from their world so yeah along with sirens from our world so try to avoid crossovers from our world unless the A.I. Tells them about it later ok and you don't have to im only suggesting this along with saying this for future crossovers

cant wait till the next chap this is a rlly cool fanfiction .

Looking forward to the next chapter!

You know?
When I finished reading this chapter(chapter 3), I can't help but to laugh like villains do.
I like Louise, I pity her for what happened to her, the bullying and all.
This plot is good, keep up the good work.

Ah the expository chapter, never an easy task for an author to face. But you have overcome well here. Things like the automated kitchen/chocolate scene and the comical armor (mk 1) fitting, along with the 'I see, I hear' fiasco and the final 'oh good god I need a drink' mirror of the 'Tiberium breaks your brain' episode really works.

And of course, now the Tiberium genie is out of the bottle. Pity Louise and Colbert don't understand the 'airborne micro crystals' thing. But Nod does have Tiberium Infusion tech, so treatment is possible. Not that it will save Hakigana from the fact Tiberium is now on it.

I think your handling the tech well enough, enough to seem like there's more then smoke and mirrors behind the curtain at least. Which honestly is all you need as an author most of the time. (Setting up checkovs guns for later tends to require a tad more of course.)

And naturally, noisy humans is the answer to all your intelligence finding needs! Also Nodtooth headsets for everyone! Seriously, nice work having our favorite talking sword (note he does not sing) derail this. It's fun times.

ah gotta love logic applied to the setting.

and the 'staff of destruction' is a rail-gun, naturally. hence the 'fired light, spirals of smoke' description.

LEGION continues to be awesome in the supporting role while the other players move in the background. The mansion assault is sure to have interesting repercussions. Makes me glad I don't have to wait to read them, because the anticipation would be killer.

Appropriate fear reactions? What is this? I am enjoying the heck out of this. Also, Thunder Warriors tickles my funny-bone after being a 40k fan.

Ah hahahaah Militants may only cost 200 credits, but they kill like anything else. Well, assuiming the LEGION's full robotic makeover doesn't cost more. Probably does, but damn if they aren't worth each credit.

In the name of Louise! indeed...

Great Story! :) Update Soon! :)

I love this Story!
LEGION is next to CABAL on of the greatest Ai in the whole Game history!
Even so i like it how you write and explain a much in every Chapter, this give it a personal Touch and i wait till every new chapter is released
And cant wait any longer for the next one! Want to see Colberst test with Tiberium and his lose of the Bet xD

And for the Staff of Destruction. 1. Its an eraly Railgun prototype or 2. the Personal Ion Canon from Renegade. But i think its first, because, the first Railguns that were used are often seen on the Ghostalker Unit who dont need an Armor for Carrying. But Ghoststalker were Mutanst and a bit stronger than normal Humans. But in TS was the knowledge of Zone Armor almost Zero so i think it was an GDI COmmando with an Railgun prototype used by the Ghoststalker. i can even Image the last words of the Commando..."That was left Handet"

waiting for the next Chapter

I like it.

I'm liking this story a lot, Legion is funny in it's own way and since this is the future, I'll ignore the terra-bytes required to know the sum of human knowledge for a military intelligence, where the memory could be used to make it faster.

Now after thinking about it for a while I originally thought it was a Zone troopers railgun but, Osmond didn't saw anything about a suit of armor. So my new answer would have to be the Personal Ion Cannon from Command and Conquer Renegade. Osmond did say blue light that can punch through a dragon and an Ion Cannon doesn't need to be carried in power armor, so that is my answer. Staff of DestructionPersonal Ion Cannon.

I'm curious about the blackhand rune on the Millitants, they could either mean BlackHand as in the pyromaniac subfaction, or Blackhand as in the best bodyguards Nod cuold afford for the Prophet. I'm leaning toward the latter.

As for the romance, I say you should do it. Its unusual, so it should be fun too read, but honestly, with the amazing work you have done on this story, Louise could be dry humping LEGION's motherboard and I won't complain