So, okey.
New chapters and new information to think about.
Why Legion dont show Louise how to "play the game"? Isnt it what had to be done first and foremost?

Very good fic.

However, I warn you not to fall into the trap of using Japanese honorifics/phrases just because the show is from Japan. You have to consider that the setting isn't always in Japan. Sure, you may have to do more work to find an equivalent phrasing in English, but it's much more immersive for the reader and retains suspension of disbelief. It's very annoying to hear a girl born in a France-equivalent nation say Japanese honorifics especially when she's never heard of them before.

Other than that, this is among the better written fics in the FoZ crossover section.

The story has definitely drawn my interest. The way everyone has reacted to Louise has been intriguing and I can't wait to see how the react to some of the more powerful Nod units.

Love the writing and can't wait for the next chapter. Awesome reference with your pen name as well.

for a second I thought an Attack Bike or buggy would come rolling out of nowhere to drive her to the city.

Will Louis be getting a pistol or something in the future to use when she is leading her troops.

(like the commanders from Old WW1 and Civil War movies)

Please don't use Japanese in the story, sure the show is Japanese but the setting is European. I cant tell you how much it annoys me when out of nowhere English turns into Japanese, even more if its a word I'm not familiar with. Though I can understand why you would use it for her sisters.
Louise isn't 'Lady Valliere', that would be her mother - she is more a Miss. Also Lord Grammont is Guiches father.
The reaction of the students was a bit over the top. You exaggerated too much and turned unease and fear of possible injury into terror and full out paranoia.
Derfflinger would be too heavy for Louise, she would benefit more from a dagger rapier or short sword wand like Wardes uses.

Loving every bit of this story

So she has an Black Hand MCV. Totally not going to throw an wrench into people's plans.

Hmmm... Interesting. A LEGION MCV as a summon. And can build android soldiers for an army to boot.

All shall tremble before Nod... Long Live the Prophet!

Very nice keep it up and quite good I am getting into it.

Oh Brimir, my sides! XD

This is truly brilliant! I love your writing style and your characterization. I hope to see more of this story!

You know for someone so smart as Louise, she so close minded and stupid in this fic. I mean come on her building sized familiar turned into a tower and high technology and all she can think is that she cannot ride on it like a common mule? Where's her sense of wonder and amazement?!

Should research a bit about Tribium cause i played only red alert but it looks very good wonder how Louise will develop / if there are pairings i vote no harem Louise/Tabita for others i dont care

No lack of familiars. It would be interesting if they could also use the 'energie' of magic. Keep writing.

I like the Animus Domini stuff, 'dollmaker' makes it easier for Louise to continue her Nod activities.

I feel like hitting myself for not realizing that MCV would definitely already have tiberium inside them, especially Nod MCVs.

In terms of infantry-wise, Louise might be a bit overpowered. It would be interesting to read Louise doing micro with what she has so that she would look like a tactician.

This story is amazing. You came up with a way past the RTS game cross over flaw. I am so looking forward to reading more. This is one of the best stories on this site. I love it. Keep up the good work.