12 sluts in the harems? are you a 13-14 yr old thats never been kissed? being a relationship with just 1 bitch is hard work. 12? get the fuck outta here.

you know what? from logical reader perspective, this author should glad this fanfic to be last this long

cause this is the shittiest op naruto representation I've ever seen, like really? become cadre class yet got controlled by a highschool girl? getting raped by a catgirl? (yes i know he's getting poisoned but come on, poison that only turn off senjutsu and relaxing muscle and suddenly he become limp? didn't he said he has access to kurama power? can't he just power it up like 1 chapter later when he met zekram?) and last, that kuroka betrayals.

yes i know author did it and it's successfully made some spice to the story, but what the points of spicing up a spoiled food? where the character, the story, the power of mc didn't matter when he's a limp dick mc that cannot says simple "NO"

I shall call that certain dirty crow “Kokaineball”.

moment:
“Oh, hello, Cho-“
Snaps pointer finger to her face. “I’m not your boyfriend!”

Knowing that you basically have stopped updating,
I would have said,
Bring in Hinata.

I am out anyways cya I guess

Shame that this isn't finished... at least kokabiel arc is complete...

Continue, please, with the story it's very good, don't give up, please, a story that the truth has no comparison. I can tell you since I am a big fan of this type of stories and the truth is that they have no comparison.

He told the truth for what and then became friends with rias like just why it was better with just yokai

Such an amazing story so far easily 9.5/10 i just hope that you one day comback to it.

It's a great story, but I think Kruaka should have been able to fight off Ophis' mind control. Hopefully she can fix things with Naruto and the other's. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Pls continue the fic cuz its really good and dont believe the other reviews cuz this is a naruto fic and dont let them get inside your head and if somebody is complaning in the review just ignore them and make them for your loyal reader you have and greate work on the story :)

I really expect the treachery. Both are self-centered and really Rias is starting to get on my nerves.

I don't know what you're expecting but this is a power fic

Kill Kuroka she deserves it anyway