Reviews for Black Winged Hero
Shadowarrior13 chapter 1 . 4/14/2015
I like the story it's pretty interesting oh and keep the harem
fg7dragon chapter 1 . 4/14/2015
Very nice story, there are far too many with Naruto as a devil or an angel that falls. Him being turned into a Fallen by Azazel is new. By the way, timeline-wise, when in DXD did he show up?
Guest chapter 1 . 4/14/2015
good good it's very interesting and please make more and longer
NyaNyaKittyFace chapter 1 . 4/14/2015
I like it so far but why did you have Naruto go all planet buster in that fight? And I do mean planet buster. The Last proved that Naruto could destroy the entire planet in that form. The only people I think he would need that form with are Orphis and Ddraig...maybe.
ThePizziaMan chapter 1 . 4/14/2015
Interesting but I say make the Harem smaller:)
shadespace chapter 1 . 4/14/2015
yes this is genius i love it
GetRektNuub chapter 1 . 4/14/2015
man this story sounds awesome. naruto is not too overpowered nor is he some devil slave. This story seems great especially as I haven't read many fallen naruto fics. Great chapter hope to read more soon .
correnhimself316 chapter 1 . 4/14/2015
I approve of the Harem, which it should be, honestly I think you made a perfect Naruto here. If it were not for the need to seal her, I think your Naruto going one on one with Kaguya would result in either her defeat, or that has Naruto less injured and with a bit more power than that is without using his ultimate attacks or the Reverse Harem jutsu again!For the Harem, I really only have one suggestion, add Levia-Tan! Or at least have her flirt with him heavily. I take it Issei is getting Asia, since they are kind of cute together, maybe add Irina and Kuno too? It will be quite appropriate for him to be with Yasaka, heck depending on what point in the series Naruto showed up in timewise, he could even be Kuno's dad.
pitbull4567 chapter 1 . 4/14/2015
interesting story
Dark Insomniacs chapter 1 . 4/14/2015
Harem lineup sounds good. Story idea is great and the execution is spot on in looking forward to more from this story in the future.
Kandraki chapter 1 . 4/14/2015
Good.
CRKT m16-01s chapter 1 . 4/14/2015
hey i think this story is a great idea, so could you please continue it. i read a lot of naruto fanfictions stories, so the ones that have him in a different reality are very neat to read. i have both favored this story and you as a author as i like your writing style and how you make a story. thanks for a good reading
The Edible Scump chapter 1 . 4/14/2015
Awesome start. Wish the harem was smaller, but I look forward to reading more.
Erza Scarlet Dragneel chapter 1 . 4/14/2015
I loved it but remove Rias Akeno and Ravel from the harem and add Raynare in it i mean you don't have a single fallen angle there not even an oc i don't know when he came but maybe he bonds with her before cannon starts and since she is a fallen she can be the first girls he falls for and will be together and it also gives a reason for him to interact with the devils
NATSUxERZA 123456 chapter 1 . 4/14/2015
well its a first for me to see naruto revived as a Fallen and personal i was getting tired of the same old devil and angel naruto it is nice to see you have changed it up the only downside for me is the size of the harem cause i can deal with maybe 3 to 4 girls max and i used to live harems but i got tired of it pretty soon and normally i wouldn't read this since i lost the taste for a harem nowadays but the fallen angel revive got me interested if it is based on the Evil Piece then is naruto basically a slave since no matter how you sugar coat it and say it is a group of friends in the end the so called friends can't ignore an order from the one who brought them back as devils and if they have a falling out the person will basically be labeled as a terrorist and criminal so i wan;t to know if what Azazel used has any of these characteristics
i liked it hope you continue it.
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