Reviews for Black Winged Hero
N.A.B. 0206 chapter 1 . 4/13/2015
Keep harem as is especially keep Xenovia, kuroka and Yasaka in.
Hell is reborn chapter 1 . 4/13/2015
u could give naruto a twin of grayfia
toile grant chapter 1 . 4/13/2015
very good
eniox27 chapter 1 . 4/13/2015
Very cool idea very rare have I seen fallen naruto even then they rarely hold my interest like this. Harem good no frills just basic and well liked girls. Still love the collection. Can't wait for mire
DarkBlade19 chapter 1 . 4/13/2015
Awesome please continue and i agree with the harem but make asia like a little sister to naruto
Mr.Heller chapter 1 . 4/13/2015
Not bad at all, finally some Naruto!Fallen Angel story, we don't have enouth of those, it's always Devils, devils, devils, devils are boring as hell by this point, and you should probably exclude Rias from harem, two reasons, 1. It's overdone, 2. The general plot heavely relies on her relationship with Issei, and they do kinda suit each other
kage88 chapter 1 . 4/13/2015
I lie ke idea can not await for more
Guest chapter 1 . 4/13/2015
I really liked the chapter, it was awesome. Can't wait until Naruto's faces the workd and learns to control his new abilities. I especially want to see his meeting with Rias
InfernoKing chapter 1 . 4/13/2015
Love the story already and its only the first chapter lol I hope Naruto will still be able to talk to the Tailed Beasts and the harem is perfect love who is in it. Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
Saigetsu22 chapter 1 . 4/13/2015
I like how this is going hope naruto can still talk to the tailed beast
GreyMan19 chapter 1 . 4/13/2015
Certainly a nice change of pace over the usual stuff. Curious of the current timeline this is in, mostly if Vali will encounter Naruto as a Grigori member.
Wouldn't mind seeing Rossweisse being in the harem.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/13/2015
This story has A LOT of potential, I look forward to seeing where you go with it!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/13/2015
I see... so then Issei gets Asia and Irina... but seriously... I wouldn't put Rias and Akeno... they have been used in harems a lot...
King Who Stands Alone chapter 1 . 4/13/2015
Keep the harem the same. Like the idea of Fallen Angel Naruto, it's a good departure from the usual stories of him being a Devil.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/13/2015
The harem is great make it happen!
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