Reviews for Black Winged Hero
SageNaruto3881 chapter 1 . 4/13/2015
this is good
Guest chapter 1 . 4/13/2015
The story looks nice and with azazel as a boss it erosenin again
fanficreader71 chapter 1 . 4/13/2015
Great start to your story, I will be looking forward to reading your next update.
Dragon God of Miracles chapter 1 . 4/13/2015
Nice intro and show of strength of azazel and naruto plus I think you should add raynare and rosssweise into the harem and maybe millet.
Mystic the Kitsune chapter 1 . 4/13/2015
I love it especially since fallen angel Naruto fics are even rarer than angel fics update soon I cant wait to see where your going with this
The Great Dullahan chapter 1 . 4/13/2015
1 Word Only one Word EXCELLENTTTT.
You need continue this please is soooo goooodddd
iZuikaku chapter 1 . 4/13/2015
What about Reynare and Kalawarner in the harem, giving them a different role than what is in canon, like being the partners of Naruto or Naruto leading while Reynare, Kalawarner and Miltelt are his charge and Miltelt view Naruto as an Older Brother? A Female Phenex(OC) maybe twin or older sister of Riser is a good addition in the Harem
Dragon Blaze-X chapter 1 . 4/13/2015
kinda meh not tooo crazed about making him a fallen angle or any faction really because his overall worth is more then anyone in that world but I'm mostly going off fairy tail dragon slayers stat sheets. But I kinda see Naruto as more of a Jiraya or early sage of 6 paths wandring around dispersing wisdom and peace
Izinagi naruto chapter 1 . 4/13/2015
I like this story and also you have use a new plot than other stories. Keep it up and continue this story . :)
NinjaFang1331 chapter 1 . 4/13/2015
Awesome first chapter
dfriel1996 chapter 1 . 4/13/2015
I love the story so far can't wait for next chapter. Could you keep Koneko in the harem please.
Shadowheart321 chapter 1 . 4/13/2015
Like your story so far the only thing i personally would prefer Sona instead of Rias in the Harem there are so many fics with Rias already but that is not so important hope you continue this
bigmeaty69 chapter 1 . 4/13/2015
like the story alot. its a great start
Guest chapter 1 . 4/13/2015
Can you add Gabriel? She's interesting. And how about Serafall. She is hot. Please continue!
Williams1996 chapter 1 . 4/13/2015
really cool story looking forward to reading more of it :)
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