Reviews for You Can't Jump Over Yourself
kawaii-4ever chapter 2 . 10/5/2007
i love this story, both of the versions are great! julietxartemis pairing is my fav!
A Cup Of Earl Grey chapter 2 . 10/8/2006
Much better The happydappy version is much better !

They're just so cute together ! AJ rules the world

'She caught his lips in her own and deepened it considerably until it wasn't very fit to describe such a kiss in a narrative rated PG.' SO CUTE ! Aw..
A Cup Of Earl Grey chapter 1 . 10/8/2006
Stupid ending.. :/

But Arty with Juliet is always good

'Although I never knew you were into bondage... we could try it sometime?"' So cute line ! Please, be so kind, and try about that..?

Oh, well, now I'm going to read the happydappy version...
bundlesojoy chapter 1 . 2/12/2006
well written, but i would never imagine artemis being that...physical.
Miss Sairas chapter 2 . 1/6/2006
hahaha! Sweet! i think i have a toothache!
Gabriel DeMarque chapter 2 . 1/31/2004
I'm a big fan of yours.
You can be funny without being funny and serious wihtout using words. Its really quite increadible.
Anyways, enough of all that.
Personally I liked the first one best. It seems more true to life and to the idea. You can't Jump Over Yourself..
interesting concept.
Thanks for the great read.
Sunset2 chapter 1 . 5/24/2003
I like this could live without the Angst part.
Lady Game chapter 2 . 12/27/2002
I resent that! I am *not* a whooss. I am reading this because *you* wrote it and if I didn't read it then you'd be after my blood again until I read it. I will not comment, it was exactly the same as the last one until like the last paragraph, so go see my review for that.


p.s have you seen tt yet?
TrisaniSlytherin chapter 2 . 12/25/2002
Ich, yuch! The second chapter is full of mush so palpable, if you squeezed it out, it would become paper. I liked the first chapter better, and although I'm more of an H/A fan (yes, I know cross-species wouldn't work, I like it anyway) the story really got me. Although I didn't know Juliet had a brain?
Jenni chapter 2 . 12/24/2002
I like both of these stories, but I still think that the happy ending-story was better.

I liked these storys because Artemis and Juliet are my favorit characters in the book.

I'm sory for my English, because I'm from Finland.
Eleida chapter 2 . 12/21/2002
Well, I liked the 'Sad and Poignant' version better, but this is still good. Duh. Did I mention I love the title, too? I don't think I did. Well, I do. I wish I could think of titles. I have a problem that way.

I also love the part at the beginning involving Viktor. He's exactly the kind of character I love. Very, very real. Artemis is different, but I don't think he's OOC - I think it is very concievable that these changes could have happened in the time period that has elapsed since the end of Arctic Incident. I'm not a fan of romantic stuff, especially not in this section, but this is very lovely.
Eleida chapter 1 . 12/14/2002
I thought I reviewed this already... maybe I'm losing my mind. Oh well! This is eloquent, thought-provoking, interesting, all that stuff you're writing always is. I probably wrote a better review on the other review I formerly didn't write. But since I never wrote it, you'll have to settle for this one.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/14/2002
That was pretty good.

Arty is in just about the right place charcter wise.

Keep going.
Emerald Queen chapter 1 . 12/14/2002
And yet another really good piece of writting from our friend the Blue Yeti.

Deffinately kool, and I like the bit in italics about Butlers view. Does that mean you're going all soft on us? You're going to find him a lady?

Just so long as she isn't a Mary-Sue this story's going to stay kool

animefanatic 0 7 chapter 1 . 12/13/2002
i like this story...but u have some grammical errors too...hehe...u said that to me...i really like the story...itz really good! continue! except i'm anti-artemis and juliet...and anti-artemis and'm also anti-artemisgay...if u wrote that story
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