Aaaaa... You finally updated! This chapter is so weird (with Tom's mini personal pampering session with the bloody hanky) but I love it!

Like Tom is still the good ol' Tom regardless of being not placed in Slytherin; which I guess made him change a bit of his future world domination plans or not. I do love the classic sibling bickering and how realistic it is. Also I am kind of torn if I didn't know Tom's not so sibling feelings for Hermione then I wouldn't be surprised if they will be platonic siblings all the way. Except that he would obviously snag Hermione before any guys tries to the (ritual? xD ) altar.

You should post in Ao3 but you might get tempted to rewrite your work multiple times (as you can edit without compromising the number of kudos nor the comments received unless you delete an entire chapter on the spot) there.

And it is up to you, whichever platform is more convenient, comfortable and less compromising to your health then go for it. :)

What a great update! I just love this story so much, and I especially love how immersive it is, because you have managed to make Hermione and Tom's characters so real. Thank you so much for the update and for sharing the story in general.
Aldo, I would love for it to be on ao3, but I'll keep reading no matter where you post it.

Your writing is so interesting and realistic. I read this update as soon as I saw it in my inbox.

I loved Hermione's fascination with Amelia. Her first period blood was kind of melancholy, I'm kind of surprised she hadn't read about it yet. But it's kind of fitting that Tom knew exactly what it was before she did. I was really surprised and disgusted by his insistence on taking her bloodied handkerchief but maybe I shouldn't be.

I giggled at Hermione's conundrum with the Yule Ball. I hope Alphard doesn't embarrass her and accepts going with her.

I think ao3 is overrated. will always be my first and last ff love. I was here since the website was formed, that's how old I am and how much fanfic I've been reading over the years.

Love this update

Lemme just re read this whole story to prepare myself for this update cuz ITS THAT GOOD

You should definetly upload this on AO3 ; the platform is way better if you want to interact with your readers and the tagging system is probably the best compared to wattpad and fanfiction. In other words, you would get more people to read your story, especially if you update regularly.

**Your reference to the flight of death was very nice ;) **

Oh...my God... thank you for the update

This is one of the most unusual and creepy fanfiction I've ever read and I love it! It's really sad that you're a "rewriter" and the updates are so far in between.. I have to reread the entire story everytime you update.. although it's always a pleasure to read this story. I really hope that you'll update soon though! And I think I know what you mean when you say that this chapter has a slight nod to the beginning of voldemort... And to think Hermione handed him the idea of controlling what happens with one's body with the help of magic!

Wow, I’m so happy you updated! I was thinking of this fic a few days ago. Perhaps I manifested this..?

Something I really appreciated this chapter were the references to historical events. I think this is pretty unique to your story tbh. Other Tomione fics have vaguely referenced WWII but you’ve managed to tie everything in a way that feels natural. Yes, Hermione would be an Amelia Earhart fan, although I had never considered it before. I’m struggling to explain it but most fics I’ve read haven’t managed to capture the feeling of being in another era quite like this!
I’m up for things being more grotesque and very curious as to what that would look like! & yes, I did catch the Voldemort reference :)
Tom and Hermione’s relationship is unfolding at the perfect pace, I can sense the development of their relationship will be really rewarding.
Thanks for updating, I’m looking forward to the next one!

Love this story, glad that they’re kind of getting over bullying each other. Would greatly appreciate it if you upload this to ao3 as well. Thanks for writing

I’m so exited that you’ve updated! And would love a repost on AO3 - I do find that site to be much more user-friendly, especially for subscribing and bookmarking stories. Regardless, I’ll read this wherever you choose to post it.

More weird and grotesque as they get older? Just my cup of tea. Let's go, let's go.

I know it’s been a while,.. but...
Stories like yours are like finding a person who will bring you the stars in the day, simply because you muse of the beauty at night.

Sooooooo good! I'm enjoying this fix way too much hahaha please continue dear author if you have the time!

This is so good! Love the whole ff! I hope you update soon