Ugh. This story is so creepy and fascinating and beautifully executed. I feel like you write young Tom really well- like, he's for all intents and purposes a sociopath, a family's love won't change that, but I still get the impression that he could, in a roundabout way, be redeemable. I also admire Hermione's residence in this story. Up there as one of my favorite, most unique tomiones so far. :)

This is fabulous! I love getting to see Tom's perspective and get a glimpse of his thoughts about Hermione.
Quick question: have you ever looked at SortingHatChats' tumblr? They have a fascinating system, and I'd be very interested to see what you think your Tom and Hermione are, as opposed to how they sort Voldemort and Hermione of the books.

Oh, wow. This is amazing! (Although, the genre is listed as Horror/Romance? So eventually there will be some sort of romance?)
The pacing is a bit slow, but certainly not too much. I'm really enjoying this, although I normally don't go for horror. Excellent job.

this chapter is fantastic! even better than the previous ones!
i loved tom's pov (which will probably get even better when he starts to aknowledge his crush on hermione).
i also loved the last part, that feeling of cameraderie was fantastic! XD
i hope it will continue like this

Loved this chapter! Tom is so manipulative lol. Toms pov adds a much richer dimension to the story. And IMO glad your characters sound British and not American.

I. Love. It. Amazing story, loving the build up! Update soon!

It's very good and I like it! Update soon!

Oh I love a possessive Tom! Great chapter. Keep up the amazing work

I love it! I hope you keep updating

Oh, I loved the altercation!

Oh I want to hate tom, but then he went and protected Hermione without a thought for his own safety. I am so conflicted on how I should perceive him. But this was a great chapter .

Another great chapter that was over way too soon. I'm not sure how old they are now. Are they still 8 or 9? Still a little confused. Also, would love to see Mr. Granger trying to have some father/son time with Tom. Would love to see Mione's perspective on this subject. All in all, can't wait for the next one.

Amazing as always. ) I felt so bad for Clara. It was nice to see Tom and Hermione kind of "team up", I wonder how long that will last?

Love that last scene, their teamwork. Very good so far. Update soon x

You choose the best events for fleshing out the character! Nothing in your stories feels unnecessary or like filler, it's all very exciting to read. That poor Jewish girl :( . I wonder if Hermione and Tom are going to be scolded and disciplined when they get home. And the attack was very nice too. I figured Tom would view Hermione as his property in a way, but I didn't think it would be related to them being family all that much. I really liked that is was related! It shows the connection he's built towards having a family, which I think is really interesting. And Tom and Hermione are going to have a deeper bond after this confrontation with the boys. They may fight a lot, but they both protected each other, although for different motivations. And they're already getting into the fights about morals! I'm excited for what the next chapter holds. Thank you! :)