Reviews for Stepbrother |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is so good. I love Tomione AU stories that are in a new time period. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this badass Hermione. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why did he hate her from the start? Jealousy? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fascinating first chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. quite twisted yet very captivating. you kept me hooked the whole time. loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the tone of this story, and your writing is such a smooth ready. Keep updating the chapters please! :) |
![]() ![]() We'll done! Great new scenario. And you write well. It would be interesting to get a Riddle POV. What WAS on his mind when he first met Hermione...I mean she is adorable. Very much looking forward to future chapters! |
![]() ![]() Very interesting... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the pacing so far! You've developed their relationship in such a natural, intriguing way - so excited to see how it evolves :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! Tom is so...Tom :) I really like how you write Hermione and Tom, and the pace is great. You cannot rush a story that could turn out to be a goldmine ;) I love the idea, the writing style and, again, I love Tom. Great chapters, looking forward to reading more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You have such a unique story! I really enjoy the dynamic between the two. I hope at some point in the story, the two would work together against someone else. It would be interesting to see how this sibling-enemy relationship could turn into a tolerant relationship, if only for a moment. Looking forward to the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() waa.. amazing story author! keep it up, please! I can't wait for the next chapter! update as soon as you can. xoxo |
![]() ![]() This is really good! Is Tom now afraid of Hermione because of her powers? I wonder if that will continue when they get to Hogwarts. I'm somewhat worried for Hermione during the holidays between the school terms where they can't use magic, because Tom could easily use brute force to harm her. Looking forward to see how/if Tom evolves into Voldemort considering these different circumstances. We know that Voldemort adopted the pureblood ideology to gain popularity and power, but then bought into his own propoganda (due to his birthright as slytherin's heir and hatred of his father). Although Tom likely only sees Hermione and ger parents as a means to an end, I just wonder if he'll be as strictly anti-muggle as in canon if he has an actual anchor to the muggle world. If he despised muggles for their ignorance in canon, yet he grows up with muggles understanding of his and Hermione's powers in this fic, perhaps he won't buy into his muggle-hating propoganda as much and only use it to manipulate other purebloods. This is really interesting, I look forward to the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() Update soon please! |
![]() ![]() Anothet chapter filled with unfathomable meaning and creativity. As you continue this story, I find the pacing refreshing. It allows us to appreciate the characters and learn them from the inside out. It's good that physically, you have kept with the book series description. Tom is known for his unearthly looks while Hermione is like a flower on the verge of blossoming. It's a believable read and that's always a plus. Still wondering if Tom was trembling from fear or something else. Update soon! |