Reviews for Stepbrother |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed the first few chapters. Looking forward to seeing the plot develop. |
![]() ![]() ![]() To the person who said I was rationalizing abuse, I trying to look it in a psycho's point of view, so naturally it's psychotic. He's boxing her in, leaving her with basically no one but him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hola This is by far the most amazing Hermione/Tom fic Ive ever come across! I absolutely adore how Hermione comes to understand she has magic and her relations to Tom. Love it! Please write more soon! |
![]() ![]() Hello, let me tell you author you are a F*king genius ! your plot original, I have read a lot of fic with Tomione couple but you really did a great job. Its a real situacion that of adoption of a child to help or develop another (not common..yes but true...and maybe Granger's really wanted another child without 9 months of wait..XD). Your chapters are meatodically written so much for having me hanging about whats next... They are childs people! things are good or bad for them nor greys here you understood that ! I really like that Hermione is not a pushover but has sense, bravery and cunning enough to keep living ( yes i'm pretty sure that a childs Tom can very treacherous and cruel beyond his adult self... hes dangerous and he know it) and does not overly do it ! Tom is just so Tom jr that you rend me speechless ...you really wrote him so similaras to how have I imagine him as child. (cunning, dangerous-delicate-innocent-looking demon span...but that can be vulnerable too) I made this review for your 3 chapters, I cuoldnt reading ...sorry PD: Im curious to who our dear Lioneness will meet in Howarts ( I stil believe she will be of Griffyndor, such a breavery like a lion). I just hope that in a near future She will experience acceptance from her pears and maybe a puppy love (Im such a hopless romatic...maybe I should stop putting sugar to my coffé ...that must be it ) XD Anyway I really like it and I promise further reviews for future chapters, keep up yor works and I wish you Loads of inspiration. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice concept. I have seen Hermione as Tom's twin, daughter, lover, enemy, friend, rival, but yours still have a fresh air. I'm wondering which house Hermione would you put Hermione on though? She certainly have enough bravery of Griffindo to stand against Tom, enough loyalty to family and hard-work for Hufflepuff, obviously enough brain and knowleadge thrist for Ravenclaw, and enough self-persevation (living with a socialpath who constantly want to torment/punish/endanger you?). She is cunning and she has the ambition to prove herself as well. I personally think that this Hermione who has been put through childhood with Tom wouldn't belong to Grifindo like the book version though : she is too smart and cunning for harsh bravado, and I think she would no longer worship the courage hero image of Griffindo. I would put my money and hope on a Hufflepuff Hermione, but we shall see.. And p/s: can you give an estimation on the length /chapters of the fiction? Also would be nice to have an update schedule if you have one |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was amazing! As twisted as their relationship is I love it :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoa tom is really scary |
![]() ![]() Great! It's okay, this development between Tom and Hermione is going to be especially interesting when they go to Hogwarts. I'm interested in seeing how their hatred transforms into a genuine relationship. I love your writing - Tom is so scary, and I can feel Hermione's happiness over her magic! Keep it up! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am very happy you updated another great chapter! |
![]() ![]() Wow that signed reviewer below is seriously disturbing. She's actually RATIONALIZING abuse. No offense to the writer, love the story, love the characters, very intrigued. But Tom is abusing Hermione out of his malice, and the reviewer is twisting it into love. I don't doubt there will be romance in the future, but it was because Hermione is not the type to eat Tom's BS and he came to respect her as an equal. But at the moment, this is not puppy love. This is not "Boys will be boys". This is a demented person doing demented things to someone else. Tom didn't push Elspeth away to protect Hermione. He's doing it because he wanted her to be miserable. It wasn't because he wanted to be the only one to make her miserable (and how you think that is romantic, I don't even know). And no, Hermione actually, actually hated him. Hated his guts. Hated his existence. Don't rationalize this. It's very scary thing that you did. |
![]() ![]() Holy balls that was intense. Tom couldn't take acting nice for very long. I know I've said this before, but I really enjoy how Hermione won't back down. And we finally got a good view of Hermione's significance to Tom this chapter. He doesn't want to leave her alone. In some parts of the chapter you can plainly see that he's still just a child, even if he denies his weakness. I really like how Hermione keeps drawing connections back to her book. And the confrontation with the snake and the magic! That was awesome! I wonder how Tom's going to act the next chapter. They've definitely made eachother stronger. And Hermione's classmate might try to get revenge. Thank you so much for the update, I loved reading it :) |
![]() ![]() I love this story! Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is it bad that I find it thrilling and awesome that Tom is already showing his first signs of obsessive and possessive behavior? I have bathing for these type of stories XP Thank you so much for updating, I'm really intrigued with this idea. Most stories have them get along but Tom being very possessive of Hermione. Here it's like he's purposely antagonizing her in order to have her attention. I feel like he's protecting her in his own way when he did that to that bully. I think that since HE is the closest person to her aside from her parents he believes that he's the only one who can hurt her because he knows her limit. He can agitate her but not to the point where she would trully hate him. I think he wants her all for himself so he'll alienate her from other children as much as possible so that HE'S the only one she has. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would be indignant on her behalf for Tom's ill treatment if she was anyone else, but this chapter made me so excited. I know, I sound like a broken record. Dont blame me. I actually like how he affected her friends, because mainly she would learn his tactics and gave it back to his friends later on. Tomione has always been about Hermione retaliating and you wrote that so well. And Hermione's bluff about her making his magic stronger XD It amuses me with Esepith (did I rmb it right?)'s reaction at Tom's inquiry. She actually sounded offendes at Hermione hating her, not just Hermione telling Tom she hated her. That's kind of delusional. But realistic alright. |
![]() ![]() Interesting shift in power at the end. I haven't read many stories with a lot of Tom/Hermione interaction, but I think this is the best that I have read. I really like the emphasis on the idea that they have similar fears and goals/needs which causes them to clash. |