Reviews for Stepbrother |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is the ultimate creepy scenario - to be a child with no means of escape from Tom, with oblivious adults all around. You've created so much tension! |
![]() ![]() Hey! Are you going to update this soon? You just started this and we're wondering if you have already abandoned your story. I hope not. Maybe treat us with 2 new chapters due the delay? Please? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter, thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so promising. Please update quickly! Can't wait for the Hogwarts years! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is great! I love young evil tom :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so glad that I found your fic. This is really good start. I love how you write Hermione and Tom view each other - demon and mortal - in children perspective that don't sound like adult. The fairytail, godmother... oh wow, Hermione is so adorable. I love the part where Hermione thought of her power. This is new but makes sense, I think. And Tom, oh boy, he is such trouble child. I hope that there will be more of Tom's thought about the Grangers (and his school, maybe) I like the slow pacing. It's nice and fun to see how they interact and grow out to be. Overall, such an interest story and I hope you continue this. Take your time, of course, it's your story but just don't take it too long :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow its so original, I'm excited! I mean I know there have been a couple stories where Tom and Hermione turn out to be adopted siblings, but this is nothing like I've read before! Can't wait to read what the next chapter holds in store! Happy writing :)! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story, definitely not a cliche. I wonder if Tom change his surname before going to Hogwarts. |
![]() ![]() I have been waiting for more stories about those two. Especially ones dealing with them being siblings or Hermione adopting Tom. Love the pacing of this story. Its not rushed. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() Poor Hermione! |
![]() ![]() ! Wow, another fantastic chapter! It's just so creepy. *shivers* Poor Hermione! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You've already approaching the Tomione dynamic that I love, and I wonder how you are going to write it. The story starts at Hogwarts, after all, and when Hermione realised she and him are capable of magic, that will make them much more on equal footing than anything else. I cannot imagine Hermione will let Tom outdo her in magic, because of their history, and a Tom that is interested because Hermione has always been more exciting and unpredictable than anyone else. And when the point where she had enough and decide not to just push back, but strike preemptively instead? I'm excited too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I sincerely hope that this would not be a fic wherein Hermione is abused, but considering the "Horror" genre.. Will be looking forward for more. Sincerely, Czan |
![]() ![]() ![]() FIGHT Hermione FIGHT (and winnnnn)! _ lol my feminist side came out with a vengeance due to this chapter but hey great story really do hope you update soon |