Reviews for Stepbrother |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I was not expecting this sorting but I kinda get where the hat is coming from |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gah again. seeing the inner workings of Slytherin house as you imagine them is so cool! I love all the other characters you've added and Eileen Prince esp! I really loved that whole scene and how Hermione got special attention from all the upperclassmen. I also love the idea that Legillimency is something all 7th years know! esp in Slytherin, not sure why its weird I've always thought it was unique to Dumbledore and Tom obviously being a natural but Snape knew Occlumency and yeah I just like the idea that some of these skills could be taught/learned and more common or universal than the books present them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm loving the story but glad the first year is coming to a close. I like that Alphard has returned, and also the way Hermione has moved into the ranks of this secret organization within Slytherin. Again this is such a creative and different fic. I'm sure there are some Hermione in Slytherin stories out there but most that I have read she is in it with Tom, and really it feels more like a reason for them to bang in the dorms than an exploration of how she would fit there. Esp with Tom not there too! Same with Tom being in Gryffindor! which is def something I have never seen before lol. he seems like he'd be a bit like James, honestly a sort of bully in red and gold, but yeah good at appearing lived by everyone too. In any case very excited to see what else you do with this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() god this scuffle is taking me back to childhood fights with my sister lol. man I forget that though they are mature, intelligent kids they are also 11 and siblings. Your story is the first where it really feels like siblings too. I guess reading Tomiones I'm so used to Tom taking a protective/obsessive brother role and this one, though he displays thoughts and sometimes actions like that there's also a good amount of just bickering and sibling rivalry and fights which is excellent and honestly just believable hahaha. I kind of love it, seeing Tom corrupt Hermione at such a young age is great too, and maybe some of that familial warmth will seep it's way to Tom, though it seems slower going and harder to break through his walls. |
![]() ![]() ![]() obviously just discovering this story I had not noticed any time lapse in the updates. but I want to just say this is a lovely story and no matter how long between updates I still hope you will continue. There will always be new people to this ship, late explorers and or people revisiting. Write at whatever pace you feel comfortable writing for, and try not to let pressure influence you. Good stories are always worth waiting for imo, and this is def one! I am so intrigued by the reversal of their houses here and how they are changing/adjusting to their uncommon placements! |
![]() ![]() ![]() gah. I feel so bad for Hermione being put in Slytherin as a muggleborn, just again really makes me hate the whole house system and bigotry in the magical world. her roommate is crazy though! |
![]() ![]() ![]() what the what? omg I did not see that coming at all! I am so used to Hermione being the one who gets house swapped in fics that I focused on guessing where you would put her, I had no idea Tom wouldn't be sorted in Slytherin! also loved Alphard making an appearance and how we got a little glimpse of jealousy? anger? from Tom. |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg the baby vanishing cabinet part was so disturbing. that poor mother and that poor baby! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohh man I honestly love the added world building/world expansion you have in your story. I meant to mention that earlier. I really enjoy the aspects of the muggle world you had included like the war, Tom's little muggle school friends and Elspeth. And now we get an expanded look on the magical world through their adventure, very cool! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg okay one thing I learned from this chapter is I am a neat freak and also good obedient type haha. I was literally cringing at the fact that these two went to be without a bath. haha you had to describe it all in such detail and my skin was crawling thinking about her getting her nightgown and sheets all dirty with street grime. Also I was appalled that their first instinct was to run away without any idea what the Grangers had in mind. That seems like such an extreme, unfathomable reaction.. considering nothing had been revealed to them. great story but I will say this chapter had me super uncomfortable, for very silly reasons hahaha. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg the way your little Tom thinks. I dislike little shites like this in the real world, they are obviously very disturbed kids, but absolutely think its spot on for Tom. I love it so much. |
![]() ![]() ![]() gah their game is so crazy and terrible, and I love it. it's one of those weird like creepy thing to see kids being so cruel. great start, can't wait to see what happens next and when they start at Hogwarts! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is great! I'm only a chapter in but omg. I love your little Tom, he's exactly as I would imagine him, and the way he's a complete darling boy before parents but terrorizes others he thinks he can control is perfect. |
![]() ![]() Can u please update |
![]() ![]() ![]() What are you doing stepbro? |