| Reviews for Stepbrother |
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   Dilemmaoftilt30920 chapter 16 . 2/10/2019 This was a fantastic read well done |
| Guest chapter 16 . 2/9/2019 Amazing story, I was captivated from the start. |
| Andante825 chapter 16 . 1/28/2019 Loved this darkly complex story. |
| Andante825 chapter 14 . 1/28/2019 “His face was an angel’s lovely corruption” - stunning. |
| Andante825 chapter 9 . 1/28/2019 The bathroom chapter is beautifully uncomfortable. Love the bits about red blood cells and rage, and the shifting center of power in their interactions. |
| Andante825 chapter 5 . 1/28/2019 Loved this chapter too (chapter 5 with the Knight Bus and the blood siblings and Paper Pills). Looking forward to reading the rest! Thank you for writing this engaging and unusual story. |
| Andante825 chapter 4 . 1/28/2019 I was ambivalent/not sure whether I liked this story until we got to chapter 4 and a realistic sibling situation. I don’t think either Tom or Hermione is OOC, but I hate the thought of Hermione being helplessly tormented. Glad to see that her helplessness didn’t last long :) |
| Uncletomalex chapter 16 . 1/25/2019 Oh my goodness ! I cannot believe what happened ! Tom and Hermione were having their routine, they were finally in peace with each other, in a way. But that is the definitive point that will change eveything... And I am extactic ! I am interested to know how big the time jump will be, because you implied they will finally begin to see each other in a romantic light. I really want to know more about of the shenanigans with the Slytherin, especially the banquet ! Hope to read the next chapter relatively soon ! |
| Uncletomalex chapter 15 . 1/25/2019 I loved this chapter ! Finally Hermione is accepted by the Slytherin. And even by the worst of them, Dolohov and his friends. In this universe Hermione will be part of the Knight of the Walpurgis ? Or is this something completely new ? Tom and Hermione hate each other like regular people love each other, in a way they are already an item. Funny how Fleamont and Septimus warmed up to Hermione so easily. Will one of them be a rival of Tom in Hermione's heart? Just one chapter and I would have updated my reading ! |
| Uncletomalex chapter 14 . 1/25/2019 Oh. So Tom definitely came back to punish her, but I could have never predicted this result ! This is amazing ! Hermione is fighting back, and Tom surely loves it, he even lives for it. Funny how Hermione seems unaware of their hidden passion for each other while Tom, in his own twisted way, seemed to have understood much better. Of course, it is because this passion in the consequence of his obsession about her, something he is able to comprehend. I am sure when their mutual rivalry will evolve to real feeling of love, Hermione will be the first one to realise and Tom will stay in denial. The only little thing that bothered me is about owls. I have to admit I liked that Hermione was following the sister, I hoped it would served as an introduction to a storyline close to the SPEW one. Hermione saying it was the owl's job to send letter seems unnatural to me. |
| Uncletomalex chapter 13 . 1/25/2019 Ah ah ah ! Hermione has her revenge by "befriending" Tom's acquaintances (we all know he don't considered them as friends). This is a nice come back from last chapter when she got an unjustified detention because of Tom. Of course, given the look he gave to her at the end, he is already preparing something sinister ! |
| Cassie-011 chapter 16 . 1/22/2019 love this! excited to see what happens! |
| PinkFriday28 chapter 16 . 1/21/2019 LOVE THIS FIC, TOMIONE 3 pls update soon xxx |
| MademoiselleRiddle chapter 16 . 1/15/2019 This story is so amazing! Please keep with it, I'm excited to see how they will grow into themselves |
| Ariwolff14 chapter 16 . 1/14/2019 This is such a great story. I keep rereading it. |