Reviews for Stepbrother
la canelle chapter 18 . 3/2/2022
I love this, can’t wait for the next update
Lica100 chapter 10 . 1/17/2022
I love the way you're building Tom's character. I hope in the end he becomes a reasonably decent person now that he's getting to know what love is. I have hopes for him. You are writing an incredible story! thank you
Tammy chapter 18 . 1/16/2022
curious to see if/how Hermione manages to pull this off. hopefully her years of being the slytherin spy have taught her something about the art of persuasion, it's always fun to see her grow into competency.
Lica100 chapter 18 . 1/12/2022
please update the story I'm loving the story and looking forward to reading the sequel!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/20/2021
Rereading while awaiting an update! Lol
Broeken Glasz chapter 11 . 11/29/2021
THIS IS HILARIOUS
you're BRAVE for reversing their houses like that
MissMrdel chapter 18 . 11/23/2021
Amazing, fantastic, brilliant story.
Truly one of the best Tomione fics I have read. Your characterizations of Tom and Hermione are amazing. I love the little twist of HG and TR's houses, it fits so will. And that with the absence of TR in Slytherin house someone else held the power.
I hope to see more of Eileen Prince, I rarely see her in fiction (excluding when Irma Pince is Eileen Prince) and have love to see more authors extrapolate on her character.
I would love to see this on AO3. From the reader point of view the bookmarking and organization system is much better in comparison to FFnet nonexistent one. I have already added this to my S-tier HP fics and tomione collections as an external bookmark.
Silent Reader chapter 18 . 11/16/2021
This story is so gripping and so goddamn good I powered through it in one go. You are an incredible writer and I'm totally in awe of you and your writing skills. This story seriously blew me away.

Your development and characterization of both Tom and Hermione is insanely accurate and natural (to me), it's delicious.

I love how the story is wholly original; it doesn't use tropes, and as a reader I'm constantly surprised (and-I never learn-shocked, yes, even still shocked after your amazing development of Tom's twisted, possessive nature) at how Tom and Hermione react to certain situations. It's such a breath of fresh air.

I absolutely love Tom and Hermione's character arcs. Though I wasn't sold at first regarding the Hogwarts Houses switcheroo (as I was curious how Tom would make Hermione's life hell with both of them Slytherins, for instance), I now can appreciate that a) it makes sense, absolutely, in how they inadvertently influence each other's nature and b) that the decision offers up new avenues for character development (and unfortunately for Tom's anger and hatred for Hermione).

And he is so sinister and clever and malicious (I love it!), I love how twisted this story is and I love Tom's grotesque love/hate for Hermione (I say love because I feel like in his own terrible way he does love her in that he wants to possess and consume her) and vice versa.

Once again, I want to express my appreciation for what an incredibly talented writer you are. Kudos of the utmost degree for NOT using typical tropes; it's a sign of your superior insight into the grotesque enigma that is Tom Riddle (and this more sinister 'version' of Hermione) and the way they act makes so much sense.

I'm absolutely enthralled by this story and really do hope you continue it in the future. I'll be bookmarking it, but should you ever update this story to AO3, I'll be on the lookout there as well. I feel like a lot of the fanfiction community has migrated there, and new readers would probably go insane over this story (in a good way, of course).
samuelleslytherin chapter 18 . 10/21/2021
this turned out very good im in love
Azalea chapter 11 . 10/21/2021
My screaming self: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH TOM RIDDLE IN GRYFFINDORRRRRRRRRR!
Normal Me: Okay, I have to admit my eyes are like still adjusting to the word Gryffindor, related to Tom Riddle. VERY GOOD FANFICTION, KEEP IT UPPPPPPPPPPP! *faints*
Cooconuts chapter 18 . 10/18/2021
Hi! I’ve just finished your fic and I’m blown away. You write so well, the feelings they have for each other are so visceral . I hope you post this on AO3 so the story can reach a wider audience, because it’s truly among the best tomione I’ve read. Hope you continue
Dubius chapter 18 . 9/17/2021
Holy shit this story is so good. Like really gave me a reason to live again aha. Looking forward to any updates! Thank you so much for writing it
Aqua chapter 18 . 9/12/2021
This is so fun! I wish you didn't worry so much. Fanfic is not supposed to be stressful. When you finish it, you can try rewriting it.
I hope you update to ao3 as well.
MissTrixxie chapter 18 . 9/8/2021
Oh please continue with this story!
biomecaria chapter 18 . 8/4/2021
Hello! I love love love this story and keep coming back to it. Yes, PLEASE upload it to AO3!
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