Reviews for Stepbrother |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Totally loving the fic... Can't wait for the next update... Stay safe |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my. Such raw and possessive feelings for each other! This is by far the most twisted and intense depiction of tomione and now that I’ve read it I can’t imagine it being anything else. Tom being ‘not-good’, yet his passion and impulsiveness landing him in Griffindor was like a bludger to the head! And how surprising it was to see it suit him so well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hope you update again soon! |
![]() ![]() thank you for updating! hope to see you soon |
![]() ![]() RAY, you are so wrong. I love the way this author writes Hermione, like she is an actual human that isn’t perfect. I do not believe the descriptions of Hermione are overly negative at all. Just wanted to counter that comment with my own opinion. I hope you update again soon! :) |
![]() ![]() This story is morbidly fascinating, but I would recommend for it to be uploaded onto a03. It’s just easier to read on that site than here. |
![]() ![]() Why you have to link all this bad adjectives about the physical to Hermione? I mean, I don't want a perfect and beautiful Hermione (that, I must reckon, is very popular in ff), I want her to have defects but you are making a hardly believable Hermione. Or at leats, thats the impression for the readers. About everything else, I absolutely love the story |
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![]() ![]() The MOMENT I realized Riddle was going to Gryffindor I whooped outloud. So. Freaking. Good. Yes. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay, go Hermione! Also you can go die Tom, nobody wants or likes you hmph |
![]() ![]() ![]() Tom is creepy and vile and charming. A complete psychopath. Hermione is wonderful, I just want to give her a big hug lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah~ im glad you still post. I'd wait years for this and not mind. Just your writing style is so GOOD |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm a little confused as to their ages here. We're still two years on from start so they're 10? Tons friends sound pubescent so must be a little older, I think. To be burly and have pimples. It's funny how much you've captured the sibling esque rivalry of "Im allowed to torture you but no one else is", except it's genuine torture rather than figurative. And as .uch as Tom calls Hermione sis it feels like his feelings and possessiveness could go another way when he's older |
![]() ![]() ![]() He's so fixated on her. Mostly with loathing but he almost feels a bit possessive. And in amongst the sadism a flash of almost normality? Like he wanted to share his snake with her? Almost like a normal boy. Though if course he also wanted to abuse her with it. And that description about how he would always find her... Gah |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, he's so vile. And her parents are believably infuriating. Come on, vengeful Hermione 3 |