Reviews for Stepbrother |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is amazing! can't wait for the next chapter :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story so far, I’m obsessed! I can’t wait for an update. One of the greatest and most original stories I’ve read on here in a long, long time. Tom is definitely still creepy but I’m hoping he’ll grow into an attractive character after another time skip or something. At this point I’m actually rooting for Alphard haha! Thank you so much for writing this, you’re so talented! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is enthralling, thank you for writing and sharing it. It would be lovely if you published on AO3: I'm French, regularly I need to look for some words in a dictionary, but on FFN you can't copy and paste so it's more tedious. And I caught the Voldemort reference immediatly but here being French is helping. This and the reference to Amelia Earhart is reminding me of "Vol de nuit" (Night Flight) by Antoine de Saint-Exupéry, a famous novel published in 1931 with an aviator who sacrifice himself to fulfil his task. I wonder if JKR was thinking about it when she created the name Voldemort: she's graduated in French literature so she must know it and some themes in Vol de nuit and HP are analogous. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so happy you updated! I love the dynamic and the simmer between Tom and Hermione. I'm excited to see the boiling point! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was so excited when I saw the update! I love this story so much and the dynamic between Hermione and Tom |
![]() ![]() ![]() How was Hagrid expelled if Tom didn't do it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm still not convinced on Gryffindor Tom. I don't think it's bravery that made him speak out to the Blacks, it felt more so his "everyone is below me and I don't care" attitude mixed with not wanting to be labelled a liar. Him putting the baby in the cabinet felt like a sly thing because he tested things out on a baby rather than himself. I definitely see why Hermione was sorted in Slytherin. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gryffindor?! |
![]() ![]() OMG! LOVE THIS STORY! you don’t know how excited I was when I saw that you updated! I’d love if you cross posted this to ao3 and please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i keep reading again and again. this story is really good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What the f*ck ‿ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg Hermione |
![]() ![]() ![]() This mf |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really love this story. thx |
![]() ![]() ![]() another great chapter! you never miss! i get so excited when i see you update 3 |