Reviews for Stepbrother
SKP chapter 18 . 1/30/2021
Omg! I love this fic and I’m so glad that it has not been abandoned
Jas Rys chapter 18 . 1/30/2021
Yay an update! Loved it! Please update soon!
Floribunda chapter 18 . 1/29/2021
Thanks for coming back!
Guest chapter 18 . 1/29/2021
I’m So happy you’ve returned to this story! I liked this chapter and it’s coming of age type vibe. I’m excited to see what Hermione will get herself into in the next chapter.
quinault chapter 18 . 1/29/2021
yet another fabulous chapter! can’t wait to see more of tom and hermione’s interactions now that they’re older
Lucy chapter 18 . 1/29/2021
God this long awaited update filled me w serotonin loved every word
Amantedelacomida chapter 18 . 1/29/2021
Thank you for the update, I'm so happy! I've actually read it again not long ago, so everything was fresh for me! Lmao

I'm so sorry for Hermione having her first period like that :( pretty terrible if the only help she can get is from Tom lol
And we get a timeskip! I wonder what happened meantime, so long we know that Tom is the handsome and popular guy who all girls want! And that Hermione is a proper spy/trusted Slytherin. I also wonder if Tom doesn't suspect about the things she is doing.

Oh! I totally agree on moving to ao3 too! It's more comfortable to read and the tags are very useful for this kind of stories! Best of lucks!
Infernalbooks chapter 18 . 1/29/2021
Omg it’s been so long, it’s great to hear from you again! Like always this chapter was great as well!
Guest chapter 18 . 1/29/2021
Oh wow, that was some kind of twisted attraction Tom felt towards Hermione.
And, so happy to see your update. Really made my day!
C0walander chapter 18 . 1/29/2021
yayy update! thank you! can't wait for more hopefully soon?! :)x
TigerInTheMoonlight chapter 18 . 1/29/2021
I know this story is messed up, but that’s why it’s so interesting! If you prefer to move over to Ao3 I will follow the story there
BeeWitchingMoon chapter 18 . 1/29/2021
Yes! I jumped for joy when I got the notification of the update! I don’t think any story has stuck with me like this one has. I have found myself checking back here every so often in case I’d missed it but the new chapter is here! I think I’d continue to check back for years just to see if there was a new chapter.
I LOVE the darkness to this! And not just a I-like-it-because-it’s-dark sort of way. The characters development makes this story what it is. Tom’s obsession with Hermione is so beautifully crafted that it draws me in with his twisted motivations. He has his own truth and outlook that makes him understandably think he is better than everyone around him and it is such a key part to his character/actions but he is still a child, naive, sometimes overcompensating to seem superior. And everything comes back to the twisted connection to the one person who really knows him. Hermione.
Her principles and need to demonstrate that she is the opposite of Tom have her stooping to his level just to prove her point. But Tom gets so under her skin she lets her guard down and isn’t afraid to get dirty to convince him of this, but it works just the opposite and he sees the darkness lurking beneath. He knows her too.
I can’t wait for more gruesome and twisted turns to come!
kayleneproctor94 chapter 11 . 1/29/2021
Whatttt?! Tom riddle a Gryffindor?! I am shocked and intrigued! This is such a fun story so far! Super different from anything else I have read!
A03 Reader chapter 18 . 1/29/2021
Wow! So lovely to see an update from this! Absolutely love the time skips, and the perverse handkerchief moment! So creatively creepy! It fits Tom perfectly!

Completely got the Voldemort reference and the other small callbacks to past chapters (I think)! It’s hard to forget them with how original and memorable this fic is! Beyond a strong female role model in a sexist era, I was wondering if Amelia Earhart was another subtle reference to drowning? Since that was her most likely fate beyond countless possibilities.

I am all here for the suggestion of moving this story onto A03! I definitely feel like it would have a better reading experience, for sure! And I couldn’t believe you were talking about the uploads here as “raw” - they are so freaking good!

Thank you for posting this! This chapter, like the last, and the ones before, are truly wonderful. I always look forward to a speedy update, but it is always worth the wait :))
MademoiselleLottchen chapter 18 . 1/29/2021
I love how ugly and grotesque it is. Can't wait for them to get older and things getting even uglier and more grotesque. Also big fan how you incorporate all those references to 1930s politics and events. Whilst reading you can tell when it takes place, as a history major I much appreciate it, it makes the story feel authenticone question I do have though is why is Tom in Gryffindor? I kinda get why Hermione is now in Slytherin, but I don't get why Tom was sorted into Gryffindor. Sure he can act like one because he's always good at putting on a show, but his heart is so un-gryffindor-ish?
anyway, keep up the good work. Very excited to see what happens next. X
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