| Reviews for Stepbrother |
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  Guest chapter 6 . 7/24/2015 Love it Please update |
 Infernalbooks chapter 6 . 7/23/2015 I like it. It's different from everything I've read so far |
| DudaHaruno chapter 6 . 7/22/2015 This fic is amazing, I don't think I've ever read something similar. One of my favorite couples and an amazing plot. Please update! |
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/22/2015 Please update I love your fic |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/22/2015 I love this story so much! Please update, I am dying for the next chapter. |
| LoveCommaTiffayy chapter 6 . 7/22/2015 PLEASE UPDATE |
| lexicon63738 chapter 6 . 7/19/2015 Yayy can't wait for chapter seven! |
| WhenasInSilks chapter 6 . 7/19/2015 I'm so glad I stumbled across this story! The world does not have enough well written Tomione in it, and this is certainly well written! Your portrayal of Tom as a child is one of the best and most convincing I've read; I'm really excited to see where the story goes from here! |
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/12/2015 I've been checking everyday for an update bc this story is THAT amazing...pls pls update soon. I'm hardcore for this story and your beautiful prose :D |
| TemperamentalRage chapter 6 . 7/12/2015 I rarely review unless the story strikes my fancy; yours certainly does. First, I'd like to mention that it is very well written and flows fantastically, along with the subtle character development. I'm thoroughly amazed, and I would like to, secondly, thank you for this wonderful installment. Not many catch the essence of the characters as perfectly as you do (and I hope you don't lose sight of it in the long run:)). Lastly, I was wondering what type of research you do or what sort of method you have, to portray the life of 20s-40s so magnificently (I'd understand if that's your secret. Many writers have secrets). The little facts in this fiction on muggle history during the wartimes are simply point blank. I applaud your talent. It's a writer's gift to make us get attached to a story as though we're living in it. Keep writing. |
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/9/2015 This fic is soooo good! I love the plot and your writing is just amazing, please update soon because I just can't wait for more. |
| tellmesomethingnew chapter 2 . 7/6/2015 This is oddly good so far. Thanks for putting time into writing this! |
| lemonsimeanfluff chapter 6 . 7/6/2015 OMGGGGG THIS STORY IS SO GREAT. Oh Tom, you cruel, cruel brother. At least now he's turning slightly okay. I can just picture Tom being conflicted with (gasp) feelings when they get older and Hermione grows up being hot af. Imagine all the guys he's going to have to fight off lmao. Hmm, if this story is also horror, do you think it's because Tom might have some twisted scary obsession with her later on? That would be fun to read ;) But oh, poor Hermione lol. Anyways, update soon! I'm loving this story so far! |
| TheMargo chapter 6 . 7/5/2015 Oh, the power struggle is and will always be a big part of their relationship. It is so characteristic of Tom to pretend to be more experienced than he really is. But it is not going to help them when they got into a real danger. I really enjoyed the end of the chapter. My first association was, of course, Narnia Chronicles. And when I read this story I feel like I am reading an old-fashioned children book (it's a compliment!) e.g. the best Edith Nesbit's stories. There is a magic but it is not yet the Harry's magic and I like it. Waiting for the next chapter. |
| bageltiger chapter 6 . 7/3/2015 Great chapter and I just love how this story of is playing out. |