Reviews for Stepbrother
Guest chapter 6 . 6/27/2015
Oh is that some kind of vanishing cabinet?
cocoartist chapter 6 . 6/27/2015
This story is delicious
SourlessCherryxx chapter 6 . 6/27/2015
OMFG. YEEEEEES. FINALLY. YOU UPDATED.

My entire life has been waited for this moment! I was so happy when I saw my e-mails. You made my morning!

I loved this chapter, and It was very awesome and interesting as always. I loved the idea of Robin Hood that he's wizard. :D I like Tom character very much.
Also omg.. They found a vanishing cabinet!

I can't wait til the next chapter. Update soon! xx
Ijoan chapter 6 . 6/26/2015
hi. great chapter. i'm g'ad that hermione still has her conscience. i look forward to your next update. i wonder if they are now at hogwarts. or maybe not...it's hard to tell where this story is going, but i'm hoping fpr something really exciting to happen soon.
Voorpret chapter 6 . 6/26/2015
Ayyyeyeeyeyyeyeyeyeyeyeyeye, I've been waiting for this next installment! I'm so upset because this fic reminds me so much of another fic I love, love, love, but that one hasn't been updated in months! Hopefully, that doesn't happen with this awesome little piece, because it's adorable and dark and all that lovely stuff, but I do understand life is life :) I can't wait for the next update. This chapter was really good. Also, I love the length of it. Not too short but not outrageously long. :) Happy writing!
Arkytior's Rose chapter 6 . 6/26/2015
Fantastic chapter! Loved it.. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.. Please Update Soon!
imjaneees chapter 6 . 6/26/2015
No matter how crazy it is, the relationship between Tom and Hermione is always fun to watch, especially when they're in character. It's incredible to see them be so childish yet so mature all at the same time. It's quite refreshing. I would really love to see more of their interactions as the story continues. Particularly when Tom starts to like Hermione in THAT sense. I would like to see him try to convince her that there's no better match for her other than him, and I can't wait for Hermione to retort that they siblings at his face XDDD

more please
Greenwood chapter 6 . 6/26/2015
Very exciting! An author with a bone for adventure indeed :-)
Lucy Greenhill chapter 6 . 6/26/2015
Hey! Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one! xoxo
UNFORGlVABLES chapter 6 . 6/26/2015
So they hid in the vanishing cabinet? WOAH!
bloomsburry-dhazel chapter 6 . 6/26/2015
I really love your story! Please update soon!
abigmess chapter 6 . 6/26/2015
Your writing is wonderful. I love how you described their adventure, very creatively. I could picture how exciting it was. I love this story so much. You are amazing :)
Anon chapter 6 . 6/26/2015
I couldn't tell if Tom wanted to leave Hermione, or if Hermione was just being paranoid. I liked the bit about Robin Hood and just the Knight Bus in general, and how significant the bias is against Muggles. It's really interesting, particularly in regard to the war. I loved how awed they were by everything! And everything in the shop! Are they in Hogwarts now? That sounded like The Vanishing Cabinet. Thank you, it was a really excellent chapter and I'm excited for the next one. I love this story. :)
Scarlet Dewdrops chapter 6 . 6/26/2015
Oh, they've found a vanishing cabinet! How cool! But why is the cabinet on the other end outside? Seems a bit odd. Anyways, I'm interested to see if they'll go back through and how they'll survive on their own until they get their Hogwarts letters, and where they'll be when they get them.
Guest chapter 6 . 6/26/2015
Awesome! I'm loving seeing Tom & Hermione's first experiences in the Wizarding World.
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