Reviews for Stepbrother |
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![]() ![]() Oh is that some kind of vanishing cabinet? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is delicious |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMFG. YEEEEEES. FINALLY. YOU UPDATED. My entire life has been waited for this moment! I was so happy when I saw my e-mails. You made my morning! I loved this chapter, and It was very awesome and interesting as always. I loved the idea of Robin Hood that he's wizard. :D I like Tom character very much. Also omg.. They found a vanishing cabinet! I can't wait til the next chapter. Update soon! xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() hi. great chapter. i'm g'ad that hermione still has her conscience. i look forward to your next update. i wonder if they are now at hogwarts. or maybe not...it's hard to tell where this story is going, but i'm hoping fpr something really exciting to happen soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ayyyeyeeyeyyeyeyeyeyeyeyeye, I've been waiting for this next installment! I'm so upset because this fic reminds me so much of another fic I love, love, love, but that one hasn't been updated in months! Hopefully, that doesn't happen with this awesome little piece, because it's adorable and dark and all that lovely stuff, but I do understand life is life :) I can't wait for the next update. This chapter was really good. Also, I love the length of it. Not too short but not outrageously long. :) Happy writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic chapter! Loved it.. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.. Please Update Soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() No matter how crazy it is, the relationship between Tom and Hermione is always fun to watch, especially when they're in character. It's incredible to see them be so childish yet so mature all at the same time. It's quite refreshing. I would really love to see more of their interactions as the story continues. Particularly when Tom starts to like Hermione in THAT sense. I would like to see him try to convince her that there's no better match for her other than him, and I can't wait for Hermione to retort that they siblings at his face XDDD more please |
![]() ![]() Very exciting! An author with a bone for adventure indeed :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one! xoxo |
![]() ![]() ![]() So they hid in the vanishing cabinet? WOAH! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really love your story! Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your writing is wonderful. I love how you described their adventure, very creatively. I could picture how exciting it was. I love this story so much. You are amazing :) |
![]() ![]() I couldn't tell if Tom wanted to leave Hermione, or if Hermione was just being paranoid. I liked the bit about Robin Hood and just the Knight Bus in general, and how significant the bias is against Muggles. It's really interesting, particularly in regard to the war. I loved how awed they were by everything! And everything in the shop! Are they in Hogwarts now? That sounded like The Vanishing Cabinet. Thank you, it was a really excellent chapter and I'm excited for the next one. I love this story. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, they've found a vanishing cabinet! How cool! But why is the cabinet on the other end outside? Seems a bit odd. Anyways, I'm interested to see if they'll go back through and how they'll survive on their own until they get their Hogwarts letters, and where they'll be when they get them. |
![]() ![]() Awesome! I'm loving seeing Tom & Hermione's first experiences in the Wizarding World. |