Reviews for Stepbrother |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! Thank you for the update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how Tom and Hermione aren't just doing the regular old "go to Hogwarts, blah blah blah" song and dance. They actually get to explore the magical world for themselves, and they're getting into their own misadventures! Are they the same age? I forgot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this. I absolutely love love this. I can't wait to read more. I devoured what you have written so far in less than half an hour! I can't wait for the rest. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just fantastic, superb, amazing chapter.. Absolutely brilliant, loved it.. I don't know why I just love these kind of twisted bond and very very possessive Tom.. Dying for the next chapter.. Please Update Soon Dear... :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is incredibly well written. Looking forward to more! |
![]() ![]() Will Tom's ( , Black, Potter, Lestange) classmates be in this story or will Hermiones (Harry Potter, Ron Weasley, Longbottom, Draco Malfoy, Ginny, Pansy Parkinson, La vender Brown, Patils, Blaise Zabini, Theo Nott, Fred & Goyle, ) be in it? Will she be called Mudblood? Will they be in Hogwarts? If so, will she still be in Gryffindor...I hope so! Please Update! I'm liking this ALOT and it's very different, I like! |
![]() ![]() Sufjan stevens- you are the blood, Within Temptation- A dangerous mind, Nightcore- come little children (male version), Slowdive- crazy for you, portishead- only you, oh death- Jen Titus, Angus & Julia Stone - You're the one that I want (cover). Please check these songs out. I think they would make a great addition to your playlist. Especially you are the blood! btw, I love your story and the playlist! :) |
![]() ![]() wow! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So creepy but I love it. Looking forward to your next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() it's interesting that they ran away. i didn't see the twist coming. like i said, i hope hermione does not turn dark. in fact, i wouldn't mind if there was no romance between her and tom and if it were more of a sibling story instead. |
![]() ![]() ![]() well, this is definitely a change in the flow of the story. but i hope that hermione does not turn dark. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder how this will affect their future relationship. very interesting progression. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like the direction this is heading in. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. this chapter was so great. great characterization, plot, etc. love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this chapter and the promising character development of Hermione and Tom individually and interactively! I also love the bit about Tom's blood in Hermione and Hermione's in Tom - there really isn't any significance in it (unless you decide to make it magically relevant), but that Tom sees a significance in it is telling of a few things. |