Reviews for Stepbrother
Jennny chapter 5 . 6/11/2015
I really wish you would update soon.
I'm dying for it.
Monkeyluv4646 chapter 5 . 6/11/2015
I really really love this fic!
I love how you write the characters and I love their personalities!
Im very much looking forward to seeing how they grow and change each other.
really excited to see more!
:)
ItsNatalie chapter 5 . 6/10/2015
i just found this story and i am obsessed!
addicted2jasper18 chapter 5 . 6/10/2015
Wow, that was a little creepy. Good but creepy.
Sighned-Anonymous chapter 5 . 6/9/2015
This is a very new take on a story that could have been very one-dimensional I like it, and I'm impressed by where this story is going.
zerorin05 chapter 5 . 6/9/2015
Amazing! Just started this today and it's really great, and I love how you portrayed Tom and Hermione relationship. You have awesome style of writting, nice flow so far.

Great job and I look forward to read more from you!
Voorpret chapter 5 . 6/8/2015
Please never ever stop writing this. I don't particularly care if chapters come out months in between as long as they come out because I tend to have nightmares starting amazing fics when they are only five chapters in.
Honestly, this is just really, really great. I love stories that start out with Tom and Hermione as children, and while the sibling thing is a little weird and a little new and interesting, I'm loving it a heck of a lot. This is just really interesting (I know I just used that word), and I love where you are taking this fic because it is refreshingly different. Tom is an evil little twerp, but if he wasn't, the characterization would be crap. I also do enjoy your young Hermione, and I'm curious to see how her personality develops in comparison to HP as she gets older.
Curious, are there going to be sexual bits later on? I'm thinking yes, but I was just wondering where you were taking this story and if it is going to be a sibling dynamic throughout or transform considering they really aren't even close to related.
All in all, I'm digging this.
bageltiger chapter 5 . 6/8/2015
Wow tom went a whole new level of creepy is a this chapter
Arabella chapter 5 . 6/8/2015
It is a lovely story, a true pleasure to , I could have never guessed that they would run away. The very idea is quite original and the summery intruging, you do not find that very easily. Thank you.
Dragul chapter 5 . 6/8/2015
Awesome, awesome, awesome
great chapter once again, your Tom and Hermione are very believable
excited for what's to come
Kat of a Different Color chapter 5 . 6/7/2015
Wow. Wow.
(Also I was listening to the playlist on 8tracks and it is EXCELLENT.)
This is fascinating, because your Hermione is being shaped by Tom's presence as much as he is being shaped by hers, and I love it. Especially because I can really see Canon Hermione doing these things in these situations. Your characterisations are amazing.
Can't wait for the next bit!
mindless words chapter 5 . 6/7/2015
Possibly my favorite chapter so far, It took at turn I wasn't expecting. I love the idea of them on the run now and connecting with each other in the magical world.
Wow chapter 5 . 6/7/2015
Omg Tom is so cool. I like the way they Handled everything I can't wait to see where you go with this please update soon
Lazarus chapter 1 . 6/7/2015
Tom is a hard character to write convincingly (especially in ship fics), but you've done an amazing job so far. I look forward to reading more.
Lady Hitomi Albatou chapter 5 . 6/7/2015
This is a fantastic story I look forward to the next chapter!
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