Reviews for Stepbrother
Guest chapter 5 . 6/7/2015
Ohh the story is taking a twisted turn
And Tom seems to appreciate Hermione
But I dont think as a sister ;)
I also do love a possessive Tom and it just seems so in character
He IS quite a possessive person who easily obsesses over things and people
(the Founders artifacts, Harry Potter)
Guest chapter 5 . 6/7/2015
Well, that was just brilliant
Cant wait for the next chapter
Guest chapter 5 . 6/7/2015
I love love love your story
It is such a great idea and you wrote Hermione and Tom so beautifully
I especially liked the ending of the chapter
I cant wait for a obsessed and possessive Tom
I also loved Hermiones vengeful side "...and curse her blind for what she did."
AnnaOxford chapter 5 . 6/7/2015
I didn't expect them to run away! Terribly exciting.
Three-Seven-13 chapter 5 . 6/7/2015
Loved this chapter, hehe how Tom had to take her with him :D I wonder if Hermione knew what she was doing when she took his blood. Haha, is there going to be some blood bond they accidentally activated, but then again, they might be too young to know anything or it isn't enough to be a full blood bond. Thanks for updating :D

Who was that creepy guy that left the Granger's place, the same time as Tom and Hermione coming back? Could be the Ministry of Magic catching up on their underage magic use, and some ministry official coming down, doesn't seem like Dumbledore..

Lol, and I wonder how they'll get to Hogwarts!
Guest chapter 5 . 6/7/2015
Wow! So Tom and Hermione's first introduction to the magical world... and I wonder who that mysterious man was? (At first I thought it was Dumbledore, now I',m not so sure...) I'm very curious to see Tom and Hermione's relationship further develop, especially after this chapter.
Jessica chapter 5 . 6/7/2015
a little heartbroken that they left, but oh so very excited about where this story is going. It's becoming so exciting now. Please update soon!
AvalonTheLadyKiller chapter 5 . 6/7/2015
Highly enjoyable. I was pleasantly surprised to find this gem. I will be quite interested to see them return to Wools, & possible be paid a visit by a certain man in colorful robes.
JStanesco chapter 5 . 6/7/2015
Hi. New reader. I always loved a possessive Tom and yours is truly amazing. I think that him drinking her blood now was a beautiful act. Like they are now bound by blood. He is hers and she is his. I actually can't wait til the next chapter! You're a amazing writer and you're story is amazing.
Thank you for writing.
Love,
J.
Emperor's Sister chapter 5 . 6/7/2015
Hola

I enjoyed this installment very much but the Knight Bus made my day. Best bits ever! Loved 'Ernie, I need a raise', but I really liked how Hermione was very much in character. Her scheme to take the wands from the sleeping wizards instead of the conductor and obliviating her parents reminds me of her from the original series. Like you said innocent yet insidious. In conclusion loved this chapter, please write more soon! :D
SourlessCherryxx chapter 5 . 6/7/2015
Oh my God! I loved this chapter so much. Although it was very creepy.

Dark, Possessive, Obsessive Tom is my favourite Tom! :D God, I can't wait till the next chapters.

Also will Tom be very dark? And will he and Hermione have some "romantic" moment? D: In the (very) later chapters. Im just curious.

I hope you'll update soon! :) x
Thatweridone chapter 5 . 6/7/2015
Ohh I like where this is going! Very nice chapter :D
indigoAtalante chapter 1 . 6/7/2015
I did not see that coming! Please keep going.
RobinQ chapter 5 . 6/7/2015
That part about the blood was seriously creepy.. Only Tom would make such a connection from an innocent act by Hermione! Anyway, can I guess the 'doctor' might be an obliviator from ministry? Otherwise how did their parents know something had happened... hmm..
Really look forward for your next update!
Guest chapter 5 . 6/7/2015
Goosebumps throughout the whole chapter. Thank you for updating soon and I hope the next chapter will be updated as soon as. I am sitting at the edge of my seat to find out what happens next with tomione. The bit with the blood - brilliant
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