Reviews for Stepbrother |
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![]() ![]() Ohh the story is taking a twisted turn And Tom seems to appreciate Hermione But I dont think as a sister ;) I also do love a possessive Tom and it just seems so in character He IS quite a possessive person who easily obsesses over things and people (the Founders artifacts, Harry Potter) |
![]() ![]() Well, that was just brilliant Cant wait for the next chapter |
![]() ![]() I love love love your story It is such a great idea and you wrote Hermione and Tom so beautifully I especially liked the ending of the chapter I cant wait for a obsessed and possessive Tom I also loved Hermiones vengeful side "...and curse her blind for what she did." |
![]() ![]() ![]() I didn't expect them to run away! Terribly exciting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this chapter, hehe how Tom had to take her with him :D I wonder if Hermione knew what she was doing when she took his blood. Haha, is there going to be some blood bond they accidentally activated, but then again, they might be too young to know anything or it isn't enough to be a full blood bond. Thanks for updating :D Who was that creepy guy that left the Granger's place, the same time as Tom and Hermione coming back? Could be the Ministry of Magic catching up on their underage magic use, and some ministry official coming down, doesn't seem like Dumbledore.. Lol, and I wonder how they'll get to Hogwarts! |
![]() ![]() Wow! So Tom and Hermione's first introduction to the magical world... and I wonder who that mysterious man was? (At first I thought it was Dumbledore, now I',m not so sure...) I'm very curious to see Tom and Hermione's relationship further develop, especially after this chapter. |
![]() ![]() a little heartbroken that they left, but oh so very excited about where this story is going. It's becoming so exciting now. Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Highly enjoyable. I was pleasantly surprised to find this gem. I will be quite interested to see them return to Wools, & possible be paid a visit by a certain man in colorful robes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi. New reader. I always loved a possessive Tom and yours is truly amazing. I think that him drinking her blood now was a beautiful act. Like they are now bound by blood. He is hers and she is his. I actually can't wait til the next chapter! You're a amazing writer and you're story is amazing. Thank you for writing. Love, J. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hola I enjoyed this installment very much but the Knight Bus made my day. Best bits ever! Loved 'Ernie, I need a raise', but I really liked how Hermione was very much in character. Her scheme to take the wands from the sleeping wizards instead of the conductor and obliviating her parents reminds me of her from the original series. Like you said innocent yet insidious. In conclusion loved this chapter, please write more soon! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my God! I loved this chapter so much. Although it was very creepy. Dark, Possessive, Obsessive Tom is my favourite Tom! :D God, I can't wait till the next chapters. Also will Tom be very dark? And will he and Hermione have some "romantic" moment? D: In the (very) later chapters. Im just curious. I hope you'll update soon! :) x |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohh I like where this is going! Very nice chapter :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I did not see that coming! Please keep going. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That part about the blood was seriously creepy.. Only Tom would make such a connection from an innocent act by Hermione! Anyway, can I guess the 'doctor' might be an obliviator from ministry? Otherwise how did their parents know something had happened... hmm.. Really look forward for your next update! |
![]() ![]() Goosebumps throughout the whole chapter. Thank you for updating soon and I hope the next chapter will be updated as soon as. I am sitting at the edge of my seat to find out what happens next with tomione. The bit with the blood - brilliant |