Thank you for an update! The only thing that still bothers me is whether Hermione's parents were really going to send her to some creepy doctor?I'd rather think that Tom is overly paranoid and misunderstood something...

You are such a good writer. I really enjoy the way you describe things and you also give a lot of insight in their minds without it being boring. I'm really looking forward to see how Tom will react when she gets friends and boyfriends. Also I hope you won't make her in love with him all the time and Tom having a lot of girlfriends to make her jealous. He is so obsessed with her :) hope to read you soon :)

This chapter was terrific! I loved every second of it especially the very ending. Demented, possessive, obsessive Tom is my very favorite and I can really appreciate how much and well you do his pov's. This has been one of my favorites I hope you update soon

Ginormous chapters are never a bad thing. Great chapter.

I can tell this is going to be an amazing Tomione fic! The story line is developing beautifully. I just love everything about it! I especially love how you write Tom. Thank you for the long chapters and I can't wait for more! :)

Your writing is so detailed and imaginative! I love how immersive I am in the story, I could feel that fading light basking their skin as they looked over the horizon. And Toms conflicting emotions of not wanting to accept responsibility for H and being blamed for the escapade and yet feeling elevated at the same time bc it inferred he was the stronger one, he was responsible for H...just wow, loved that insight into the complex play of his emotions. And how creepy...how he wanted H in him through her blood. But when had he decided that H was his? And why? He was so mean to her, but I would like to know why? Pls reveal! :)). What an amazing story! So looking forward to upcoming chapters. I was skeptical when I started reading this whether this storyline would work, but it's brilliant, bc of how you write.

I'M SO GLAD YOU UPDATED! I REALLY LOVE THIS STORY! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

It was a real delight.
Loved it to the core.
Please update soon.
Its real hard to wait.
Keep it up!

Creepy but I loved it just the same. Tom really is a horrible influence on Hermione. Really.. The blood Tom was obsessed about? Creepy. But as a whole I think I loved this chapter..

Man, I am loving ur story. How they (Tom especially) went from loathing each other to kinda defending and reassuring each other (again Tom especially). Also the running away part, did not see it coming. I thought they'll go to hogwarts and hermion will ignore him. And he'll be hella jealous of whoever she's gonna date. However, are the going to remain brother and sister or be together later on? Slight confusion there. Keep writting and updating you are doing a great job.

I loved this chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next!

I'm such a sick person that I fins this sweet. I get the feeling that Tom is more dependent on Hermione than she is to him. They have this weird, trusted, sick bond that I'm pretty sure Tom will make sure will never break. I fear for whoever it would be that Hermione will like. I get the feeling that he won't live long or stay sane long.

I'm surprised that they don't want to get a wand of their own though. And I can't wait to see what they do to Mrs. Cole XDDD

So good so far

Again, wonderful chapter. Love the character development! 3 nothing to really criticize because your doing such a great job. Keep it up!

Wow. Just wow. This has to be my favorite chapter so far. Everything about it was amazing. Their wandering through the alleyways, the water pump scene, the sunset with the story, the bit of insight into Tom's background, everything. They have the mindset that they're in it together now, and Tom sees Hermione as an extension of himself. I was completely taken by surprise with the choice to have them run away, and I really like how original that is. The use of the Knight Bus was excellent, and Hermione's sleepy talk finally drove the nail into the coffin where Tom's growing fascination with her occurred. Overall it was a great chapter, this is an amazing story, and I can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks for the update :)