|Reviews for Silent Guardians|
| animegrlsteph chapter 28 . 9/12
First I’d like to say I’m sorry that people have stolen your story, those people are just jealous of how good this story is. Now, thank you for the amazing story, it was truly an enjoyable read and the way you portrayed Naruto and Shikamaru was brilliant! The way you took this idea and spun it in the unique way you did was ingenious. I absolutely loved the plot and it made me feel so happy to see Shika and Naru as brothers!
| TheBeauty chapter 26 . 9/12
Interesting story even though at the end it was getting a little bit ridiculous. If Naruto could so easily bring back the dead people why didn't he bring back any of the Uchiha's?
| chocolate splash chapter 1 . 9/8
this is a good story... though it has the usual genius and powerful time travellers. i especially likef the fact that two of them travelled back in time, and so had company when changing the past. i absolutely loved the parts where shikamaru shows his dedication and care for his hokage... good job
| Blinded in a bolthole chapter 1 . 9/4
Loved the Summary AN.
| Kaonashi-UNVERIFIED chapter 11 . 8/21
Sukoshi is used for food... for ex: Can I have a little bit of your cake. A better term would be Chiisai (Chiisana) which would be akin to small in this situation. So in total it would be "Looking good Chiisai Shika", though the more grammatically correct would be "Chiisana Shika" but that is more used to describe plus Kosetsu seems like a easy going character.
| fancyspinner chapter 28 . 8/15
This was such a feel-good story thank you so much. I am so sorry your work was plagiarized I hope that you reported it and that they were taken down. Please take care
| fancyspinner chapter 13 . 8/14
I am really enjoying this. I like the realism that you bring to their coming back to the past and how they react to things. It’s just real enough without being too vivid or harsh to read. I know horrible PTSD can be from personal experience and you’re handling it amazingly well. I love how they screwed up the invasion angle.
I’m not sure how far into the future you’re going with this but it’s been a lot of fun.
I hope you don’t mind a bit of constructive criticism but in Chapter 11 you have the time not matching the event. Here’s an example, you state that there is 30 days between the end of the preliminary rounds and the final fight but then it all happens the next day. That’s probably the only thing that I’ve seen aside from some spelling errors but other than that it’s wonderful a great read. Thank you so much
| mischiefpuff chapter 26 . 8/4
I found this story this morning (around 11:30am) its now 11:09pm. I binged read all 28 chapters. Its horrible that people find the need to steal someone's work. I love that none of the relationships felt forced
| stylo1 chapter 1 . 8/1
finally a completed time travel story. it was a bit crude, and i still dont believe that they could fool so many shinobi. was a fun read and dont let the ppl who stole it bother you, they couldnt even finish it and was far less realistic then this
| ElysiumPhoenix chapter 28 . 7/31
This is an amazing story that I've thoroughly enjoyed reading.
| Zannah Bane chapter 1 . 7/27
In ms word there is a replace all choice, so you could change the entire document in one go... if that is you have it saved I word,or something similar...
| Guest chapter 14 . 7/23
This story is awesome.
| doremishine itsuko chapter 27 . 7/19
what is your new account may you pass me that one please through inbox so I can add you to my favorite list of author as well.
Love this story so much and since I read it along time ago I decided to read it again, just for the sake of memories and enjoy it again. Hope you have more amazing stories just as this one
| Thefriendyouhate chapter 28 . 7/17
thats really a bummer that people keep doing that to you. your stories are amazing and I hope that you find a way to stop people from taking your works.
| Jenndude5 chapter 28 . 7/14
Hate to break it to you friend, but you can't post links. Clever ways to get around it is to add spaces before and after periods, or using parenthesis around periods.