Reviews for He Defines Me old version
TheDemonLady chapter 18 . 12/20/2016
Okay, I already reviewed the last chapter, but I needed to review more

This was so brilliant and perfect and I LOVED the ending
He was trained as a pet for 15 years, killing his master absolutely broke him
and as I am a total sap for a happy ending (I would totally not object to a sequel where Severus comes for him and nurtures him back to health) I can not object to how this fic ended, it was just so beautiful and fitting and it is still swirling through my mind

This has become one of my new favorite fics EVER and its horrible because the ending has messed me up so badly, but there is no way I am going to be able to stop myself from reading this over and over and over again

You are an amazingly talented writer and I have no shame in admitting I envy you
TheDemonLady chapter 19 . 12/20/2016
This is brilliant and perfect, but I'm dying and I wish it had a happy ending!
SaiyaCat chapter 1 . 12/19/2016
Camille.Ad0 chapter 19 . 12/7/2016
hum? So, Harry is lost in a timeloop? The doesn't really make sence...
BGM chapter 19 . 10/25/2016
I understand why you finished this fic like this, but I don't think is te better way to. You should make and epilogue telling us the difficult time he is going to have because his different nature and something like that. Thx
lilyflower101 chapter 19 . 10/9/2016
What chapter did you update?
cantstopreadingfanfictions chapter 20 . 11/7/2014
it was really an amazing story...heartbreaking at some point...but amazing nonetheless
but I would have loved an epilogue...what happens to draco? who does he end up with? is there a possibility of there forming a triad between the three? does harry get better? what about his magic?
please please please tell me what happens!
steve chapter 20 . 10/6/2014
Hej! It's a good ending for me! (well.. you can't say i'm 100% normal, but still..) tom is dead, harry is with severus and lucius didnt go mad.. Yeah, for me it's good ending. .
Breanna3593 chapter 11 . 11/17/2013
Oh man, I wish that you were still in commission, because I want the sex scenes! I thought that the one that you made for this chapter should have been in there. I think you missed an opportunity to convey more emotion.
Breanna3593 chapter 10 . 11/17/2013
Lmao! I swear, more than anything, your A/N's leave me in more of a mind fuck than anything else! I take it that you're male.. Because I doubt any female has been accused of being 'too feminine'. You also like penis (which is yummy) and I'm getting the impression that you have an open relationship. (You mentioned a boyfriend once.) Hmm. I don't know why, but you fascinate me, as well as creep me out. Eh.
Breanna3593 chapter 8 . 11/17/2013
You didn't even write out the first one. You skipped all of the (extra) yummy stuff, which made me mad, but the flow was still good without it.
CleanSheet chapter 18 . 11/14/2013

I just stumbled upon your story and I haven't been able to stop reading. I hope you keep writing more cause it's seriously some hot stuff.

I was wondering if you have anything similar (boy slavery type) but with the sex scenes actually in it?
Saphiretigger chapter 20 . 8/11/2013
:) luvs it
musme chapter 20 . 5/5/2013
I love it very much!
Rooz990 chapter 20 . 6/4/2012

well written

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