This is gonna sound horrible, but I love your bad guys! They’re so evil! Obviously, I want the good guys to win, but the fact that the people on the other side are confident really makes things a lot more interesting providing a lot of tension.

James is a true idiot, isn’t he? In a way, I can understand his fears, but on the other hand. prophecies don’t have to be completed when they first come out they can be completed with other people even.

OK, parts of this chapter were really funny. Harry freaking out was amusing.

Also, as soon as I catch up with Prince of Slytherin and I’m gonna go read your strange books.

I think I finally got to the point in the story where I stopped reading. So everything I read from here on in is going to be new to me. I really enjoyed this chapter. And I completely agree with you about the whole situation in the marauders fifth year.

Hi, I have a question about the sanction that Theo is under. If he left Britain, wouldn’t the sanction not impact anybody outside of Britain? He made a comment about having to maybe live in the non-magical world but if he simply left Britain and got away from the people in that government Wouldn’t that alleviate Ascension as he wouldn’t be around those people or is it every country in the ICW

Poor Theo! How awful!

Honestly, I read with VoiceOver so I can’t actually see the typos. However, I didn’t notice anything particularly egregious as I listen to it.

Yes, the scene with Ron was particularly horrifying. Very well done. I’ve gotta hand it to you.

Well, things just get more and more interesting.

It’s good to see so many plot holes filled in. Lol. I can’t wait to see where this use of Luna‘s character will go. She and Neville are two of my favorite characters in the series. I also like dobby so I’m wondering what will happen with him and the wild magic that’s calling him. I hope he manages to survive.

Peter really is the bad guy. I love to hate in this story so far. Lol.

The universe is so well developed that it’s wonderfully amazing. One of my problems with the books that the characters were more like cartoon cut outs.
Anyhow, on my reread parts of this are starting to come back to me. I think it’s more wonderful the second time around.

I completely agree with your author’s notes. Well, I like POA because in some ways, it was a more relaxed year. The way education is handled throughout the entire series just drives me up the wall

The fun thing about rereading a story after a lot of years is that entire sections of it seem new. This is one of those sections.

This chapter was actually a lot of fun to read.