Marvelous! I truly loved your fanfiction. I am even mad at myself for missing it for years. However, since it was never finished I guess that is a good thing. At least no I went in with the knowledge that I may never know how it ends haha.
Thank you for sharing your gift! This was a great piece of work. I hope you may someone day decide to finish it.

Thanks for a great read so far. Definitely one of the better Reptilia challenge responses I've seen, and an overall engaging read. Sure hope you find your way back to this at some point. Please?

God, I hope the rashness and lack of thought isn't going to be a defining character trait. He messed up by saying Voldemort's name which is whatever and suicided by fighting all the Death Eaters in a battle that he killed Voldemort only because of luck. Then he questioned Ezekiel about the unfairness of death which if he any thought into makes a lot of sense. Him being a lynchpin in the war got 48 chances to go back, even spreading that across the only people he knows isn't enough not to mention the billions of others. Ugh, thinking it through only makes me more irritated.

Lmao I see that Kara is taking center fucking stage. Solid no from me. It’s called Harry Potter. Not bloody Kara Who Gives A Fuck

I wish you’d pick this back up.

I really like your story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.

Loving your story. your characterizations are spot on! Will hope that you can get through the busyness of real life and be able to come back to this story.
Wondering about Dudley's education. He's 15, so he should have at least two to three years more. Is he doing home based learning?
I hope that your plan is for Sirius to LIVE! Always regret seeing him die when he hadn't much of a chance to live.
Oh, and good going at how you were tweaking the reader with wondering WHO was going to be THE girl in Harry's life. You threw several options out there. I thought Hermione was going to be the one at first, then you made it look like, no, she's not. Then there Susan, Daphne, and Ginny made the scene. I was really wondering for a while.
Hoping the forces of darkness bit the big one!
Oh, and if you really hate the term muse (especially when it hides behind the curtains, or under the rug, try sicking your mojo after it!

I was wondering if James Miller was Shadow. Then the hint that Hill has a daughter in the group is making me really wonder. It could be Luna or Tracy, I think. I also contemplated that Shadow and Hill were Unspeakables, but this chapter blew that out of the water. Quite a conundrum.

I was going to make a joke that "I am on a mission from God" done in a British accent isn't quite right, it needs to be in an inner city Chicago accent! - but, after this chapter ending, it seems crass to break the mood.

I think I read this fic not too long ago. It does bear a reread.

Please update. Any story with Harry P./N. Tonks pairing is a good story.

Thank you for writing

LOVE, and I mean LOVE your story. Don't listen to others and their stupid input. Listen to yourself only.
OUTSTANDING. This is my 3rd read from C1 to C31. Keep up the GREAT work.
You go girl :)

Rune spiders sound awesome.

update please

its been 5 years