I kinda wanted to see a Taiream moment added since the title of this character could have used both fathers and their daughter, but no, that didn't happen and yes, I'm really disappointed by it.

First of all Sword get a pet cat their just as good as babies and caring for a pet will prepare you for raising a child of your own, but remember the fact that babies are more than just being cute, you have to care about them, just like a pet.
Now then, this story is building up nicely, thanks for writing it.

I'm not going to lie, Violet is my favorite Taiream child.

Ayyye! I had no idea you were on here! I seen and read a few of your stories on DeviantArt, definitely happy to see your work is posted on a platform where I’m more regularly active.

I must say that I freaking adore the way that you write Tails and how you bring new life and context to some of Candicindy’s artwork! I’d definitely have to say that “Grease Monkey” is my absolute favorite, but all them stories are equally lovely and adorable.

Looking forward to what all you write next! Rock on and God Bless!

All this fluff and sugar was a pleasure to read. Your dialogue between the characters was pretty witty at times! Loved it all and loved your writing.

I'm thinking, cats can't taste sugar? Or am i losing my mind?

Jeez I just... laughed when Shadow drank the formula to test it. How disgusting and ridiculous.

Jeez the Rouge part taking her kid to steal at the museum had me giggling. Awesome.

Awesome

I love the chapter Grease Monkey! It's my favorite one, anyways you did a wonderful job on this series! I can't wait for more stories in the future!

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I must say, as always you go above and beyond in terms of presentation. I love how this story has resolved so seamlessly, especially with Blaze showing some solid character growth, if not learning a bit about marital duties and whatnot. Eloquently written, and positively riveting as always. Parts to make you laugh all around, and you’ve got these characters just nailed so well, please keep up the fantastic work. I always love how you describe the scenes, they seem to fit perfectly in the sonic style and universe so well I feel like i’m looking into an artist painting of a world foreign but all the same similarly beautiful. Also, gotta say, I loved the negotiation scene, it was just brilliant! That and Cream, just wow, she made me laugh so hard. Just splended, so as I used to say under my guest user, I’m always hungry for more, and I can’t wait what else you have in store.

Noticed a few inappropriate phrases like 'squeezed out her son' would be better written as 'conceived'.

Aside from this though I can genuinely envision a mellower blue hedgehog raising a strapping baby. Best wishes to the happily married couple.

As for Knuckles and Rogue though, ouch. I can't imagine any regular couple getting along with this sort of banter between them. Although this might be normal for them.

Intrigued to see where this goes.

Oh my godddd this was such a great read! Brilliant chapter and I loved every moment~ can't wait for more!

This... was an absolute joy to read. The entire first half of the chapter had me in stitches, and I could not wipe the smile off my face even if I tried. And as the second half, it reminded me a lot of Beauty and the Beast. Was it the castle and the ballroom dancing? Yeah, but that doesn't change the fact that I had a good time reading this. Silver owes his friends... BIG TIME.

And Pen? How do you know that Sword's personal library has those kinds of stories in the first place?