Reviews for Eye Contact
Wyrmseeker chapter 1 . 1/3/2017
This is great! I like the premise, and the fact that Dipper and Pacifica are clearly growing closerwhile still staying true to their characters. The dialogue, once again, is fantastic; I can very much relate to Dipper, and Pacifica responds with her typical sharp wit. There's a lot of great description here, too. I'm particularly fond of Mr. Guldigger's reactions (or lack thereof) and the kiss at the end. I will point out that I don't think 12-year-olds are supposed to be drinking champagne, but the introduction still served to get things moving and brought me into it well. "Once in a Lifetime" was good, but this is much improved. Excellent work!
Santa chapter 1 . 7/11/2016
This was great! Definitely one of my faves. Your writing is pretty and it flows really well from paragraph to paragraph. I also like the characterization you have on Dipper and Pacifica. Good job and thank you for this fic. :) there's isn't a lot of (completed) well-written dipper x pacifica so i really appreciate your work!
rosevoid chapter 1 . 6/4/2016
This was so super cute!
lennoxmacduffes chapter 1 . 1/9/2016
This was beautiful
forcedInduction chapter 1 . 12/14/2015
Great continuation and my favorite story of yours so far. That fois gras joke was solid and the romance is working well. I really enjoyed this.
StkAmbln chapter 1 . 6/21/2015
This is great
sniff chapter 1 . 4/19/2015
very good indeed
Rayfe chapter 1 . 4/18/2015
This is a good take on Dipper and Pacifica after Northwest Mansion Mystery. I will always like this story because the title makes me think of 'Soos and the Real Girl', "I'm not scared of your eyes at all. I'm gonna look at them. EYE CONTACT!"