Reviews for No More Looking Back |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god this was so beautiful. What a gorgeous, heart felt, honest and true way to close this story out. I am obsessed with your ability to tug at the heart strings and bring brilliantly real and flawed humanity to a story. OB. SESSED. Thank you for letting us know that Alex and Amber are on the path to okay. Thank you for making us cheer for them 3 Bravo, sis! |
![]() ![]() ![]() THIS IS SUCH A GOOD STORY! I know that I am reading this like years later but if you can please continue it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a good story. I'm hoping you continue it soon. I'm surprised Alex hasn't spanked Amber yet, because of her behavior. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know it's been a while but you should continue this! It's fantastic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've spent every free hour I had these past two days reading this story. I love it so much! Please please please continue! |
![]() ![]() Please update this story. I love reading about Alex in this older brother role. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay. I think I'm caught up! I want to say this is getting intense but the whole THING is intense haha. I think that Amber and Christina are gonna be amazing friends and I can already see the crap they're going to give Alex; who by the way needs to like, drink and relax for a hot minute. The guy is always on edge with Amber. She might be a little sister, but she's grown, haha. I love her comebacks and snark. She cracks me up so much. I can't wait for more of this story! You're doing such a great job! |
![]() ![]() ahhh i loved this chapter! can't wait for your next one! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a great chapter. So emotional and painful. I loved how you showed how similar Alex and Amber are. I especially loved the line "it was like fighting with himself". Alex was so perceptive to recognize when Amber recoiled from his outburst. But of course he knew it because he lived it. So so sad what they each went through but I hope it helps to bond them. And poor Alex feels so much guilt for letting Amber go through it just like I knew he would. I really hope they are able to reconcile soon and maybe they will open up to each other soon but I imagine that it will be a rough ride before they do especially since they are both so closed off and have built up such strong walls. Oh I almost forgot I loved the flashback, like I always do. I think it's a great way to reveal their pasts to us. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this! Update ASAP please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoa. This was brilliantly done. Alex is so strong, yet so weak at the same time. Excellent balance between the two. And poor Amber- just trying to reach out in her own way, and constantly getting her hand bitten again and again. Well done, my friend, very well done. |
![]() ![]() omg! i'm so happy that you updated. I haven't even read it yet, but I just want to let you know how happy you made me :). will go read it now! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great job as always. I just love this story so much. Uh oh Alex is gonna be so mad that Amber was snooping through his stuff and fishing for answers from his friends. But now they are going to have to talk about their pasts right? They will have to open up to each other about what all has gone on since they have been apart. I can't wait for whatever is up next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAAAAAAAAAAAS girl. I'm so anxious for the next part now. I love Amber's no-nonsense attitude in getting what she wants. Also, your attention to detail- like the "mistaken bus route", I love that you throw that kind of thing in perfectly. Well done! ( I thought really hard about that while reading so I wouldn't forget, LOL!) Another great chapter, and I'm already looking forward to the next! You rock! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! Alex is my favourite character and i love that you're writing about his family! I love amber and cant wait to find out more about her background! Please update soon cant wait to see what happens next:-) |