Reviews for harry potter yu yu hakusho crossover challenge
theorignialLexiCullen chapter 1 . 9/4/2015
Okay, so 2 things:
1. You're breaking the rules of this site by posting a non-story on here.
2. This plot is moot. God!Harry can do everything and anything, therefore there is no conflict, ergo no point. I know it theoretically sounds cool but I've read it before and it's just a hot mess. A good story needs conflict and this cannot ever generate one.
Kittenn1011 chapter 1 . 9/4/2015
Just so you know, this challenge is completely unwritable. You've proposed a premise, not a plot. A plot is the conflict of the story- the problem. The problem being difficult to solve is what keeps the reader, well, reading. Your requirements for a ridiculously superly powerful God!mode Harry pretty much kills all potential plot conflicts in their tracks, meaning the story would be boring to write and to read.