Reviews for A New Man |
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![]() ![]() This story is absolute Gold. Please continue. I will purchase chapters if I must |
![]() ![]() ![]() Darn! Sorry to see that this hasn't been upsated in years. Thanks for the work you have already given us though! This was a very interesting premise and I could see how it would eventually go from what we know of the MCU. The major plot points I could see happening are that Harry would probably try to meet with Stark or Pepper and that the meeting would be listened in on by Shield. From their it might be that Harry gets involved in the whole Stane issue and that AIM/Hydra take more of an interest starting to think about breeding or cloning to try and get their own magical persons team. From their I am sure that Harry would either be hoping that Stark could help him investigate a way home or leave since Tony is much more a mechanical minded than universe jumping. I bet he would be sad to realize that Jane Foster and Darcy would have been a better bet for him finding a way home than following up on Killian/AIM. Maybe Harry would get mixed up in the Thor movie and end up meeting Agent Coleson of the Strategic Homeland blah blah blah SHIELD. After that, Harry would either be Asgard bound or SHIELD HQ bound. I don't think that the Sorcerer Supreme would be getting involved in this until after Strange takes over. Either because reasons or the TVA and Sorcerers cannot see HP and his version of magic. (Harry learning alongside Strange would be interesting though) well I have waxed on quite a bit but from this point the story could take so many different paths that the TVA would hate it and try to remove it over and over again! Lol! Maybe someday we will see where this goes! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Like character from the book...the most foreshadowing sentence I've seen this week! Hoping it's what i think it's. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man, I would love to read more of this |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked the story so far, thought it looks like it's been more or less abandoned. I would read it gladly, if it was continued. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! Super interesting and fun to read. Wish there was more, but I enjoyed what there was. I was dreading reaching the end of what you had posted. Thanks for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story would of been a lot more interesting if it was a crazy scary harry. One of those totally done with everyones shit. |
![]() ![]() ![]() is it just me or is chaper 2 just a black screen |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...US Marshals do little more than transport or hunt down prisoners. if he was investigating human trafficking like you had him claim, he should have claimed to be FBI. |
![]() ![]() ![]() naming Percy as minister just made me throw up a little in the back of my mouth. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting crossover. Pity you haven't updated in awhile, though I can see why it might be difficult to figure out where to go from here. I hope inspiration strikes! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is why I don’t read 6 chapter long stories, haha. You know the end is coming the whole time and it’s going to be such a bummer. All in all, this is quite good. As usual I think you just get how to make a crossover engaging. Too many people write them like: “what if Harry Potter showed up during act 3 of Avengers and just helped everyone out?” when they should be writing like: “what would Harry do if he was in situation x and then y happened?” Character and motivation are so important, but a lot of crossover fics just kinda mash stuff together and then rehash canon. I guess what I’m trying to say is please never stop writing! You make this site better by being on it. Also, I have to say, having read all of your in progress stories I think you’re right to put your energy into the Toppling Heroes series and Shadow of Angmar. This one was shaping up really well, but I think those two edge it out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think Harry is failing to consider a few theories, like that he is a copy of a real person from another dimension, but I think he’s also too quick to dismiss the fictional-person-brought-to-life theory. I mean, it makes about as much sense as being yanked into a dimension where your life is a popular book series, though it is probably pretty upsetting to think about. But really, which is more upsetting, the idea that you weren’t real a week ago, or the implication of the books ending on the scene where you were sucked into a parallel dimension that you’ll never make it home? Also, I wish there was a scene coming up where Harry interrogates JK Rowling about where she got her ideas. I suppose the current political climate makes that way too fraught of a concept, but it could have been hilarious. |
![]() ![]() ![]() “breezed through security like it wasn't there” I mean, the TSA fails 90% of their own internal tests, so Harry might not have even needed a spell. |