Reviews for If I Can Be in Yours
Thymelady chapter 1 . 10/15/2015
OMG, send help! When the second Crane turned up, I nearly lost it! So hot! *happy*
The Clockwork Blue chapter 1 . 10/11/2015
This is my fantasy in a nutshell. THANK you for writing this.
ReadtoRelax chapter 1 . 9/13/2015
I this was like a double scoop of chocolate overboard. One Crane is hot, but two Cranes are a forest fire. Fierce and out-of-control.
nicew chapter 1 . 6/21/2015
Both Cranes are super sexy!
TTracee chapter 1 . 4/30/2015
Pretty good one-shot. Hot but not and still it makes you wonder.
freckled98 chapter 1 . 4/22/2015
Go Crane
Guest chapter 1 . 4/21/2015
Breakfast can wait.
Yalegirl03 chapter 1 . 4/21/2015
Bless you. I chuckled at Abbie worrying that she broke the time space continuum.
Angeldolphin01 chapter 1 . 4/21/2015
I love it.
Camelia Arianne chapter 1 . 4/21/2015
Eh, interesting point, i have to admit good j job!
marshmallowdeviant chapter 1 . 4/21/2015
Ha! Delightful :) Laughed out loud the ending was so sweet :) x
Jolo815 chapter 1 . 4/21/2015
Wow! What a concept! I wouldn't have thought of two Crane's doing it with Abbie. That is Genius! I love Abbie having sex with 1781 Captain Crane but Wow! Great work. ;)
farmgirl1964 chapter 1 . 4/20/2015
Loved it!
Hellz Blaze chapter 1 . 4/20/2015
Ooooooo! I was hoping that someone would do one with 2 Cranes... nicely done even if it was just a dream! _
MeridianDreams chapter 1 . 4/20/2015

Abbie and Two Cranes, I like it. No, I love it! That was probably the hottest one-shot of Ichabbie I have ever read. I think you are on to something. Abbie is so damn fantastic that of course we need two Cranes to handle her. So yes, I would not mind if you dabbled back into this again. Just saying.

But um yes, this was surprising and fantastic and something I didn't realize I wanted until I read it. So go,d stars all around!
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